Earth-62 Batwoman: Volume One - Chapter One

Earth-62 Batwoman: Volume One - Chapter One

After her parents were murdered in a botched robbery, Brenda Wayne vowed to battle all forms of injustice. Utilizing her resources, Brenda has employed her own style of justice for ten years. However, after an enigmatic & intelligent foe begins to take the elite off Gotham City's streets, Brenda must employ her full arsenal of skills and gadgetry as the caped crusader, Batwoman.

By DeathByToilet - Oct 04, 2016 08:10 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
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TheHero
TheHero - 10/5/2016, 11:49 AM
Hmm...interesting. The action sequences were written well. The interactions between Brenda and Jason were great.

My only complaint is with the format. You should probably space every paragraph. That way, it doesn't seem everything is smashed up together

Other than that, great job and I can't wait for the next chapter
DeathByToilet
DeathByToilet - 10/5/2016, 12:02 PM
@TheHero -

Thanks, bud!

I forgot to do a double space on the paragraphs and am currently smacking myself in the head because of it, so i'll probably do a quick edit.

Will definitely have it prepared next time though, thanks!

Thanks for the constructive critiques!

- DBT
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