Sorry I dont have any art yet my friend Dustin is working on the character designs but I thought Id share the plot I wrote with you guys and get some feedback. Rather you like it or think it needs some improvements please let me know so we can clear it up before we get the ball rolling.
The story would start with Gavin Sanders, a young man about 25 years old, and his 18 year old sister Emily. Their parents died when they were both very young and Gavin raised and looked out for Emily. Emily becomes involved with a man named Tyson Dorvont who is a drug dealer, leader of a dark cult, and is known to be primary suspect in dozens of murders and drug related crimes. The police refuse to go after him out of fear however and Gavin does not approve of Emily and Tyson's relationship. After a time Emily realizes how dangerous Tyson is and attempts to leave him wich causes Tyson to become enraged and he kills her claiming no one leaves him. Gavin vows revenge and begins making his own weapons and costume out of supplys he has in his home. He says he will be a Thorn in Tyson's side until the day one of them is dead and it's from that statement that his name is taken.
Thorn's search for Tyson reveals that there is much more under the surface such as the police chief being Tyson's half brother. The chief says that Thorn won't kill him because he's a hero and heroes dont kill, to which Thorn replies that he's not a hero, he's something else and kills the chief. He journey concludes with a final showdown between Thorn and Tyson where Thorn discovers that Tyson's use of black magic has made him nearly immortal.
What do you guys think? would it make a decent underground comic?
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