PITCH: The Miles Morales Spider-Man Movie

PITCH: The Miles Morales Spider-Man Movie

Here's my pitch for the Miles Morales movie if Marvel/Sony should ever choose to go in that direction. With Peter Parker about to hit the screen for a sixth time, it couldn't hurt to take a chance on a new idea. I've broken this pitch down in terms of plot, themes, casting, structure, etc. but more than anything I just hope it makes for an enjoyable read.

By Natman - Mar 05, 2016 07:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic



MILES MORALES: SPIDER-MAN

 
SYNOPSIS: Spider-Man is dead, killed alongside the Green Goblin in the Oscorp lab that created them both, when their fighting triggers a radiation bomb that Peter sacrifices himself to stop. New York is still mourning its hero while a new threat rises, causing a young man to rise to the occasion to train himself to earn the right to wear the mask.
 
BACKDROP: We open with the huge hero’s funeral for Peter Parker. It’s awe-inspiring and the narration of that carries us into meeting Miles for the first time. He’s young and smart, but a little reckless. He’s a very different kid than Peter was. While it’s acknowledged that Spidey had a good run as a hero, most of his supporting cast will not be making an appearance. The only two who will play a major role are Aunt May, who serves as a sort of mentor figure to Miles, and J. Jonah Jameson, who is so guilty over Peter’s death that he goes after this new Spider-Man for totally different reasons than he went after the first. He wants the new Spidey brought down because he feels its an affront to the old one’s legacy.
 
THE STORY: Miles is a young boy with a promising future. He’s enrolled in a very prestigious school, but he keeps getting in trouble. Each time, each dispute, causes him to be at risk for simply being kicked out. His parents make it quite clear to him that he can’t take any risks. These people are always looking for excuses to kick someone like him out. His dad never had opportunities like this growing up and he doesn’t want Miles to waste them. But then Miles gets bitten by the spider and everything turns upside down. His powers are different than Peter’s, he has no idea what is happening to him at first, but his best friend Ganke is a Spidey superfan and tries to guide him through it.
 
Still, there’s the looming question of what to do about it. He tries to ignore his abilities, tries to hope that they will go away, but they don’t. He can’t help doing the right thing. But he’s bad at it. Miles has no idea what he’s doing and also knows that Spider-Man is an idolized hero, an icon that people look up to, almost God-like after his death. He can’t be that, he doesn’t believe he has that in him.
 
When he realizes that he can’t avoid this, he tries to see what it was that made Peter special, so he goes to the one person who might truly know: May Parker. She explains to him that it wasn’t Peter’s powers that made him amazing, it was his heart. And she sees some of that in Miles. But she also says that the life Peter chose got him killed and it’s going to do the same to Miles as well. That’s what he has to come to terms with if he’s going to do this. If he still chooses to be Spider-Man, maybe she can give him a few pointers to at least keep him alive a little bit longer.
 
TONE & STYLE: Basically, this movie is The Karate Kid with Aunt May as Mr. Miyagi. He starts off as the last person anyone would expect to be this hero, this fighter, but she sees something in him and elects to whip him into shape. She’s snarkier than we’ve seen in most of the movies so far. Peter’s death made her a bit more cynical and a lot more blunt. This is a fighting movie, through and through, and it’s about Miles learning to believe in himself while simultaneously training himself for the big third-act fight.
 
THE THEMES: There are the obvious themes, first and foremost, of taking on a legacy you don’t believe you’ve earned and trying to live up to a name. Miles has a picture of Peter that he carries with him throughout the movie to remind him why he’s doing this. Just something he stares at once in awhile. The overreaching theme of the film, however, is coming to terms with a purpose that you know you might not survive. Miles steps into the role of Spider-Man having already seen where it gets you: killed. He’s becoming a hero but the story constantly deals with the fact that this is a line of work that one does not generally survive, paralleling his story to a firefighter or soldier. It’s something you have to do, despite the consequences.
 
THE VILLAIN: But of course, a Spider-Man movie needs a villain. We tease enough of the big fight between Peter and Norman through flashbacks to establish who the Green Goblin was. Then, just as Miles is getting into the, er, swing of things, we reveal that the Goblin actually survived the explosion. He’s a lot worse for wear. His body is exponentially mutated, he’s covered in scars and tumors and it looks like he can barely even move. His mind is scattered, but the skill of his genius remains. He sends out hand-made drones and other creations made from his lair in the sub-basement of the abandoned Oscorp labs, all targeting Miles, almost as if they’re testing him.
 
As we go along, Miles pieces together the fact that all of these Frankensteined parts came from Oscorp and begins to discover that the Green Goblin may have somehow survived the blast. He comes face to face with the Goblin at the end and, because he’s been staring at this picture through the whole movie, can look him right in the eyes and determine that this is not Norman Osborn. This is Peter Parker.
 
Peter has been training Miles behind the scenes, watching him for awhile, even planting the spider. He’s been calculating everything to build to this moment. Peter did not die in the blast, but he wishes he did. His whole existence is agony, he can’t have anything like his old life back and even more than that, he had closure. He was finished. He’s been sending out drones to prepare Miles for this, because that’s his whole motivation. He wants Miles to kill him. When Miles refuses, that’s what leads us to an actual fight, which ultimately leads to Peter sacrificing himself once again when he realizes the building is unstable and is going to collapse on both of them.

In saving Miles, Peter realizes what he's become, how far off his path he's driven himself, and gives Miles his blessing. Tells him that the mask will make him enemies. It will destroy his relationships. Being Spider-Man is not just a role you play, it's a responsibility. And with great power comes great responsibility. Then he dies. The speech gives Miles the closure he needs to feel as though he has earned his webs and swing comfortably into the sky as Spider-Man for the first time. 
 
CAST: You want a relative unknown for Miles and probably Ganke as well. They’re kids, so let’s cast kids, right?
AUNT MAY – for a younger, sassier, cynical Aunt May I can think of no one better than Jane Lynch.
J. JONAH JAMESON – I’ve been saying for some time that Alec Baldwin’s Oscar winning scene in Glengarry Glen Ross is basically an audition for J.J.
NORMAN OSBORN – You know, we’re only seeing him in brief flashbacks, but let’s really cast it anyway, especially if it’s decided to bring him back at a later date. I’d go with William Fichtner.
PETER PARKER – Have to go with someone young, but seasoned, and who could play the Goblin role as well, obviously. I won’t lie, I’d love to see Andrew Garfield make a comeback for this. Let me have that dream. Or even Tom Holland, who I'm sure will be great in the role. If neither of them, how about Radcliffe? 

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IFeelLikePablo
IFeelLikePablo - 3/5/2016, 7:33 PM
Inb4 this isn't news
Scorpo
Scorpo - 3/5/2016, 7:43 PM
I like this.
Beetleborg
Beetleborg - 3/5/2016, 7:46 PM
Miles Morales should have a TV show
Natman
Natman - 3/5/2016, 7:50 PM
I filed it under Fan Fic I have no idea how it wound up as news. My bad.
Natman
Natman - 3/5/2016, 8:42 PM
Someone might as well delete this. It's somehow categorized as both news and fan fic.
BlackPhillip
BlackPhillip - 3/5/2016, 9:05 PM
Morales sucks! I'd rather see O'Hara

Gunslinger
Gunslinger - 3/6/2016, 2:29 AM
@Ramiel - O'Hara would be great. It's truly different enough to warrant a screen interpetation. The future setting, the slight power variation, and arguably the best Spidey suit.

As for Morales and the clones... Meh
Drakenxtreme
Drakenxtreme - 3/5/2016, 9:52 PM
@Natman I have a lot of issues with it...for one its not very faithful to the source material...the most compelling part about Miles is the fact that his father has a lot of secrets. That his uncle is a villain..and it was both Aunt May and Jessica Drew/Spider-Woman who were sorta the mentor figures for him. I also don't like the Peter Goblin angle...its way off the source material...I get movies take liberties but they stick to some foundation of the source and your pitch is very far away from the source like you basically retconned the whole Miles Morales Spider-man comic to suit a movie instead of retooling the comic to a movie...

Here are my more detailed issues:
Synopsis: It's good i would keep it..its basically the synopsis from the comic so its good and translates well to film

Backdrop: No real issues i would only change is adding Spider-Woman as a mentor as well on the super-hero side..She wouldn't be heavily showcase but just like you said Aunt May was the Mr Miyagi i think the more physical training and mentoring should be given to Spider-Woman and also a cameo by MJ as well

The Story: This is where i had a lot of issues with...Miles main relationships were with his father and his uncle Aaron (The Prowler)..that should be showcased...Also Miles was bitten before Peter died...that can be showcased through various flashbacks of when he first got his powers i agree it should start out with Peter's Funeral and we get pieces of Miles when he first got bitten which was by his uncle stealing the spider that would eventually bite him accident. Also one of the things that made Miles compelling was his guilt of having the powers to help Spider-man that could have prevented his death which is what motivates him to be the new Spider-man. A big thing about Miles is he was most worried about living up to Peter's Spider-Man more than anything! a sense of approval from both the city and who was closest to Peter, which is why Spider-Woman was a mentor for him despite her own reservation about him downing the mantle of Spider-man

Theme: The whole theme from the Miles Version of Spider-man was not the danger of being Spider-man but Living Up to Peter's Spider-Man. That needs to translate in the film because for average movie go-oers we have only seen Peter and if your pitching a film about a new Spider-man the film should reflect that and we should feel that journey of Miles trying to live up to Peter

Villain: NO GREEN GOBLIN or Peter fake out...Green Goblin is over done...two villains that Miles tangled with were his uncle Aaron and a Mexican cartel leader version of Scorpion. This is good because you have one villain of a personal nature and another for the big battle. How i would do it is obviously like the comic Aaron figures out Miles is Spider-man and tries to use Miles to get rid of Scorpion. Scorpion would be human until he decides to even the playing field and becoming a scorpion hybrid. Miles realizes his uncle was using him and it ultimately leads to a both physical and emotional confrontation and like the comic the death of Aaron. It would both mirror Uncle Ben death in the fact that someone Miles cares about dies but also contrast in that this person also abused Miles gift for his own purpose making him struggle with the fact that maybe he is not right for the mantle of Spider-man. The city of course is being terrorized by Scorpion and despite his reservation he fights him and stops him proving that he can take on the mantle.

A good end scene would be just like the comic Fury gives Miles the final seal of approval to be Spider-man. Post credit would be a set up for the sequel in which a unknown man reads the news paper on Spider-man and he we see the venom symbiot cover his hand and crush the newspaper article signaling the Venom wars storyline.

Ultimately i would set up a trilogy..the first movie being how i just displayed to you..the second being the Venom wars in which Miles loses his mother..then the 3rd movie would be both the reveal that his father worked for SHIELD and that both Peter and Norman are alive in which both Spider-mans take on the Goblin putting full circle that Miles is truly ready to take on the mantle..just like the comic Miles would star in as the Spider-man of solo films in the future while Peter would be a full time Avenger in the Avenger movies or as a side character in other Marvel movies
Natman
Natman - 3/5/2016, 10:17 PM
Bendis' writing is so cinematic that I didn't want to just do a frame by frame adaptation because that origin story is already almost like a movie in its own right. This whole pitch is if I was just given total control to go balls to the wall with the story. If Marvel wanted to play it safe, and they probably would, then Uncle Aaron and the Prowler would definitely be the route to go. I just could not resist that third-act twist if you could keep it hidden. It'd go over about as well as Iron Man 3, but I'd stand behind it.
Drakenxtreme
Drakenxtreme - 3/5/2016, 10:37 PM
@Natman - like i said...the real issue i had with your pitch it strayed away from source material..im not saying go frame for frame cuz everybody has their preference of direct adaptation vs. loose adaptation but my big thing is staying true to the essence of thereof the source...the fact that you said Bendis writing is already cinematic is partially why folks want either a movie or tv show of Miles's story because the source alone is a movie...BUT!! unlike most super hero movies which are rooted in well known heroes where you can change up some stuff to ADD to the source because they have been portrayed for decades..here you have a relative unknown character taking over the role of a well known figure in both movies and comics that if Bendis wrote it the way he did to get readers on board with Miles it should stand to reason that staying true to that essence should do the same in film.

I get the need to go all out and do something different but respectfully i would not enjoy the essence of the movie cuz i would feel its not true to the source in terms of the motivation behind the character..essentially what your doing to Miles story is like changing Peter's uncle death in the movie to something else...This is the first introduction to the character to film..it should carry the same essence from the comic to the screen..afterward once he is established and folks get the idea of what this new Spider-man is about then liberties can be taken because he is relatively new...the Peter Goblin angle i just did not like mainly because just like the comic readers missed Peter and the writers brought him back..adding him die twice in one film is overkill and if by some chance you do bring him back a third time it would just diminish his death..Also bringing him back the way they did in the comic is more realistic to the studios to do because if Miles is successful they can have him do the solo films and officially keep Peter as the Spider-man for team up films or as a side character giving comic book fans what they wanted as Spider-man as a full member in the film and average movie viewers get still have the spider-man they know teamed up with new stories while also having another Spider-man franchise with a new person to also get new stories instead waiting for the inevitable reboot and etc...

You gave the Pitch I'm just giving you critics as if it were an actual pitch to the studio or even Bendis or Stan Lee who KNOW the character and studio who know the direction they want for the character...this makes more sense for a first film and then afterword take liberties....
Earth2SpecialKa
Earth2SpecialKa - 3/6/2016, 12:30 AM
This us only tangentially related, but I had an idea about Venom in the MCU. Bring back Joe Mangionello as Flash Thompson... Senior. Flash Jr is a bully at Peters school but his dad is a soldier who lost his legs, blah blah etc Agent Venom. What chu guys think?
DEVWoulf
DEVWoulf - 3/6/2016, 1:53 PM
Jane Lynch? [frick] no no no. Keep her away from CMBs. I'm not reading any of that until she is removed.
MediaMan
MediaMan - 3/6/2016, 6:20 PM
Natman,

Don't be discouraged by some of the reactions. You gave it a shot; good for you.

I've never read a Miles book - it was after my time. But I think eventually - many years down the road - there could be a Miles movie, although I suspect Peter may still be alive in it. Who knows. Just a guess.

Anyway, just wanted to encourage you.

MM
FlyntCoal
FlyntCoal - 3/6/2016, 8:12 PM
This is well put together and full of excellent ideas.

However, it sorta ends the saga of Peter Parker on an extremely sour note. His journey should be long and storied, definitely not ending with him being Green Goblin.
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