I will try to keep my opening as short as possible. Because of THEHAWK being a great confidence booster (thanks man!!!), I have decided to finish my Watchmen sequel. This is Part 2; you will experience new places and characters… Open your minds and enjoy… Oh, and sorry I took so long to write this part, I was busy for awhile…
Here’s the URL for Part 1 if you didn’t read it: http://comicbookmovie.com/fansites/criticworld/news/?a=9797
Watchmen: The End if NOW, Part 2
The Jester walked across a rooftop in Brooklyn. He had an interesting costume… He wore the hat of a Jester, had an electric squeaky nose on his mask, a clown face, and he wore pointed elf-like shoes. He carried sharp, throw able candy canes at his side. His main candy cane, which was about 4 and ½ feet long, could fire bullets, and had a sharp edge for fighting. He was investigating crimes that the Russian mafia were pulling off over here. Apparently they were breaking into houses all over Brooklyn. Surprisingly though, last night they broke into one over in Manhattan (the apartment of Sam Hollis). But, he forgot about it quickly and moved on. He made his way over to an apartment building that was to be the target of a break-in. He went down a side-railing and climbed down onto the emergency exit. He saw two approaching cars coming. Men with guns came out and bashed the door in. Jester broke the window and climbed through. The bedroom he broke in to was that of an elderly man with a shotgun at his side. Jester quickly disarmed him, and went out of his apartment into the main hallway. The descended the stairs and tackled the first guy he saw. He took him out with a kick to the chest. The next guy got bludgeoned with the candy cane. Two more guys were in a downstairs apartment, Jester made his way to it. One guy stood at the door; Jester threw a sharp cane (a sharp candy cane, but he calls them that) at him. It pierced the guy’s back and he keeled over. Jester went into the apartment where a young man was getting beaten to death with a bat. The man with the bat swung around a swung at the Jester. He dodged the swing and grabbed his leg and pulled it. The man fell over and Jester beat him with the bat. He then grabbed the guy and said: What reason do you have to break into this poor guy’s apartment? The man said: He’s Johnny Santorum; he was cheating on Billy Santorum’s daughter. So, I was sent to beat the $hit out of him. Interesting, Jester said. Jester walked over to Johnny and said: He kid, if you help me get your father-in-law, then no one will ever hear of this, you hear? Johnny said: Sure Mr., I’ll do anything to get ole’ Billy off me back… Jester turned around and shot the man on the floor. He then asked Johnny where Billy holds his meetings. Johnny said: He doesn’t trust me wit tat tuff Mister, but I know that every Tursday at 11:00, he goes out in his car somewhere. I figure tat if you follow him, den you could find out where he goes… Why are you talking like that Jester said? Deys hit me hard in the haw Mister… Oh, ok… Jester then broke the jaw on every man who broke in the apartment. He then made sure that tomorrow he would follow Santorum to his meeting. Until then, he headed home to The Slums…
The Killer was pi$$ed off big time! He stood in the observatory of the Empire State Building with his team. They all wore the same thing. Black Ops suits with weapons. They had handguns, shotguns, machineguns, rifles, grenades, and swords. They also wore night-vision goggles. It was Thursday; he was supposed to take out the men meeting for the annual meeting every Thursday at 11:00. But, it was now 11:30 and no one had showed up yet. Either his informant f*cked up and gave him the wrong place or, they called the meet off for tonight. Let’s just blow the whole building up where they’re supposed to meet said Mr. Yellow. Everyone on the Ops had no name, they just went by colors. There was Mr.: Yellow, Blue, White, Brown, Black, Purple, Pink, and Orange. Their leader was known only as the Killer. An expert marksman, who had many informants for his job: being a Hitman. Nah… said the Killer, we wouldn’t wanna waste ammunition. The group agreed and stayed quiet. Eventually, a light came on as men walked into a room with a big table. Using binoculars, Killer found that they were leaders of the Russian mafia. So, he said: Blow the room. Mr. Pink and Mr. White brought out a FIM-92 Stingers; they fired at the room and blew it to bits. Job well done, Killer said.
Jester was on the rooftop of the building when he heard an explosion. He followed Santorum to the building, but he didn’t get out of his car. He almost went to grab him when the other guys showed up. They were the main leaders of the 8 different gangs run by the Russian mafia. But, the room they went into just blew up. He saw where the missiles came from, the Empire State Building. He then saw many movements of people leaving the observatory area. He figured he was now screwed. So, he headed home.
Sam Hollis stood in his lab. He had run tests on Amanda, and found that the energy she exerted from her hands had originated in her brain. She cried during the test and he yelled at her to keep quiet. He now felt bad about that. He needed to clear his head. He put on his Nite-Owl III suit. He was surprised it still fit. He opened the passageway leading outside, the mist sprayed all around it as it opened. He then ignited his boosters and flew up and out. He opened his mouth panel and felt the breeze on him. It felt good to fly again. He landed on a nearby building when he heard the screams. A woman was running from 6 men. They had chains, bats, shanks, and knives. She had a purse… They planned on mugging her and doing something else... Nite-Owl flew down in front of the group. You let her go, he yelled! The group of thugs snickered. So, Nite-Owl produced his mini-gun for them to see. One guy freaked out and pulled out a .45. He fired at Nite-Owl, and it somewhat pierced his armor. Nite-Owl started fired at them as they rushed him. The suit was flexible enough to fight in. He dodged some punches, kicks, and weapon hits. He threw some of his own. After about 2 minutes he snapped one more guy’s leg and he fell over. Nite-Owl turned the woman, she ran away screaming her head off. Nite-Owl took off again. He came to a run down building. He stepped inside and took off his helmet. He breathed in and out, he was exhilarated. Unfortunately for him, four drug dealers (with guns) were pointing their weapons at him. They had now seen his face, and might kill him right now. He whipped out the mini-gun and fired at them as there weapons fired at him. He got hit many times, but his armor protected him. But, one bullet managed to graze the side of his head. Nite-Owl fell down, bleeding. The four other guys were dead. He eventually ignored the pain, grabbed his helmet and flew home. Once he got in his lab, Sandra was waiting for him. He took the suit off as she said: What the hell is wrong with you? You could have gotten killed. You got shot in the head. Are you f*ckin nuts? Amanda could have lost her father tonight. Sam piped up: I saved a woman from being mugged and then killed, and stopped a drug deal. Is that so bad? He started to work on his wound. Sandra came over and helped him. I guess not, she said. She fixed him up and then said: I always liked you in that costume… she smiled and kissed Sam. Next, well you can guess what happened next… :P
Rorschach was FURIOUS!!!! Matino lied to him, and he killed a man… but he deserved to die… Rorschach headed to his hideout. Once inside, he could immediately feel the presence of someone. He had been worried that Matino had gotten out, guess he was wrong. He walked to the room where he chained Matino up. Inside was a shotgun-wielding gunman. Rorschach pulled out his magnum, and stepped in and fired. The gunman died before he hit the floor. Suddenly, a titanium wire came around Rorschach’s neck, choking him. Rorschach struggled with the man holding the wire. They went around the room, knocking things over. Eventually, Rorschach’s wrist-blades popped out and sliced into the guys thighs. As he started bleeding, Rorschach stamped on his foot and the guy dropped the wire and fell to the floor. Rorschach grabbed him and said: Where’s Matino!!!!???? But, the guy started foaming at the mouth, he had bitten down on a poison capsule (not one put in his mouth, he actually just committed suicide). Rorschach kicked his dead body and walked out of the room. He made his way across New York, searching for Matino. He beat up 20 different thugs, and killed about 9 others. Finally he got some good luck. A guy (who had over 150 broken bones) said that Matino might be holding up in the Slums. Rorschach then ran back to his hideout. He grabbed ammo for the shotgun and magnum. He also stocked up on grenades, his rifle and ammo, and an Uzi with ammo. He had to go through Gangland to get to the Slums. Gangland was the most dangerous place in the world. It also has the highest murder count in the world. Over 200 people are killed every couple of hours in Gangland. And Rorschach wasn’t planning on getting jumped by 20 guys. But he did take on 18 guys at once back inn 1999. He walked in hoping for the best…
The Jester was tired. He had been searching for answers the past few days. He hadn’t slept in over 56 hours. That’s crazy!!! He did do some good deeds though. Sixteen women and ten men would live to see another day because of him. But, many others needed to be saved. He even rescued two little kids from a burning building. He even stopped six store robberies. He also took on many gangs, looking for answers about the blowing up of the meeting room, but no one would talk. He was in Gangland. Nobody messed with Jester in Gangland, no one. The Jester used to run a gang, until his mother was killed by a rival gang. He swore revenge (but never got it) and would never go into a gang again. So, now he’s the Jester. Also know as Kyle Richards. Born July 4th, 1979. He was also Born on the Fourth of July. But, he looked nothing like Tom Cruise. He continued his nightly walk. He strolled down Banger Ave. and came onto Shooter St. But, still he found nothing. He then saw something he couldn’t believe. Rorschach was walking down the street. He had his hands in his pockets. Jester walked over and said: What’s wrong with you, you can’t come here. You’ll get your ass fried big time!!! Rorschach said: I can go wherever the f*ck I want, so f*ck off jackass!!!
Ok said Jester, but I warned you. He walked past Rorschach and headed down an alleyway. He came upon a construction yard where a gang meeting was going down. He saw that all the men were armed. But, he had an advantage. There was a big crane, along with many girders that could be knocked down. He snuck over to the crane, taking out six thugs as he went along. He started up the crane, it made a loud whirring noise… this alarmed the gang. They started to shoot at the crane. But, Jester knocked the girders down on them and took out or killed most of them. There were five guys still standing. Jester used the crane hook to take out four of them and knock over the fifth. He then got out and went to the fifth. He grabbed the guy and questioned him. The guy said: That was a hit made by some Black Ops guys. Real f*cked up sh*t. The Russians high up in our government (which the New Frontiersman believes that there are communists working high up in our government), had them killed so that they can run things from now on. Apparently, something is gonna happen soon, but I don’t now where. If I were you, I’d do some hero sh*t and save the f*cking day already man!!! Jester punched the guy out. He then decided that tomorrow, he’d try to find out more about what’s going to go down, tomorrow. But, for now he needed his sleep.
Sam looked out the window. His eyes froze in horror. Men with guns were coming into his apartment. He went to Sandra and Amanda and said: Grab your things and head to the lab… there are men coming. They got up and ran to their rooms. Sam locked the door and put the table and chairs in front of it. He then met up with his wife and daughter as they unbolted the lab door and went down the stairs. Men were already beating at the door. Sam bolted the lab shut and turned the security system on. He gathered up his Nite-Owl III costume and grabbed Sandra’s Fightress one. He then turned on Archimedes II, or Archie Jr. His second Owl-Ship. It was ovalish like before, but had more weapons sticking out, and you couldn’t see inside the ship through the windows. Also, there were more thrusters and the ship could go faster. The ship went up and out the secret hole and flew into the sky. They flew in silent for awhile. Eventually Amanda wanted to know why people were after them. But, Sam had no answer for that. He just didn’t know. Then the jets arrived. Men in F-15 Raptor Jets were right on their tail. They were hitting them with machine-gun fire, but Archie could take on torpedoes. Archie rolled around (everything was buckled in, thankfully) and dropped out Owl-Bombs. Two out of eight jets were taken out. Archie swung around and fired on the jets, taking out five more. The last one fired all six of its missiles. This didn’t really hurt Archie though. Archie then dropped one bomb and it hit the jet. They flew on. They stopped in a warehouse owned by Gerald Archness (an alias for Sam). Sam then got into costume and said he was going out. Sandra said he couldn’t leave them alone. But, Sam said: I’ve got to find out who’s got it out for us… and anyway, no one can get into Archie but us… But Sandra said: We already know it’s the for your suit, plus you might get hurt. I’ll be fine Sam said. Then he went out. He flew towards where all the info. was: Gangland. He landed there and made his way through. He was shot many times, but he’s protected. He received no answers in Gangland though and returned to Manhattan. He found a man there who had answers. The Communists were after his Nite-Owl suit. Sam then heard that the man after it ran the Museum of Natural History near Central Park. Sam headed towards there…
The Killer looked into the window of Alexander Bitrus. Bitrus was in New York for the week and he had been hired to protect him. He walked the perimeter and then had another guy take over. He wanted to go have some fun… He headed to a strip bar and then another strip bar. He killed a couple of bums (he hated bums) and blew up a few sh*tty (he hated sh*tty cars) and then shot people on his hit list. That basically sums up the life of the Killers. Strippers, no beer, and killing. He returned to watch Bitrus. Once there he heard an interesting conversation…
Alexander Bitrus was in a pi$$y mood… He was talking to the Vice-President (unbeknownst to him, was a Commie). He started yelling into the phone: I want to know how the hell you’re getting an extra million dollars a year put into your bank account? Huh? No answer? Caught you right on the sh*tter huh?? Well…? The VP said that he would tell Bitrus why when he returned to Washington in two days. He then hung up. Bitrus yelled into the phone: You don’t hang up on the f*cking president you’re a$$hole!!!! Bitrus slammed the phone down and it broke. He then went to take a shower.
The conversation was very interesting to the Killer. He wondered why the VP got that money each year, and from whom? He contacted his informant who looked into it. An hour later he had an answer: The Vice-President, Alan Bergeruss, was a communist. His informant couldn’t find out who was paying him though. The Killer also learned that a hit on the president was just ordered, by Bergeruss. The Killer then ripped out his earpiece, took out his tracking devices, and ran. He would not kill the president. He ran from his men, who were now ordered to kill him, and made his way to the Slums to hide out…
After his little chat with the Jester, Rorschach was rightfully pi$$ed off now. He made his way through Gangland, he only had to killed 26 people, but his true problems started in the Slums.
Once arriving in the Slums, Rorschach immediately had distaste for it. He had been there once before, but it hadn’t been this bad. A man, whose bones were easily visible, was eating pieces of concrete from the sidewalk. He saw people being beaten, raped, slaughtered, and even someone was eating a poor, dead guy. Rorschach got into some fights to stop the madness. The cops were even worse; they shot up with heroin in their police cars, and liked killing random prostitutes. Rorschach made his way through beating up thugs. He even got into a big fight with some. Five men strolled up with guns, knives and chains. He killed all of them. The last one was nice enough to spill where Matino was though.
Rorschach reached where Matino was apparently hiding out. He broke in (after killing the eight guards of course) and headed to the basement. Matino had a weird sick desire for basements. He felt safe in them. He fought through Matino’s men with what little ammunition he had left. He saw many posters of Vladimir Markov (the president of the Soviet Union (or Russia, sorry I’m used to saying Russians instead of Communists, and Russia instead of Soviet Union. If I say that, it just means Communists, as Russia is still Communist in this story). He ripped the posters down as he saw them. He headed in the direction where the guards where trying to rush him. They had him pinned down once, but a flash bang grenade took care of that. He finally made it to Matino’s office, where lied Matino.
Once inside, Matino put a bullet in the side of Rorschach’s head. His mask took some of the damage, but he was still hit. Red, white, and black was flowing slowly out of the ripped part of the mask. Rorschach angrily grabbed Matino and severely beat him. He broke both his knees. Shot his arms up, and bludgeoned him many times. Rorschach kept asking who he actually worked for until Matino finally budged. He spilled out three words: Museum in Manhattan. Rorschach stabbed both arm-blades into him and he died. Then he heard noise.
Rorschach!!!! Come out with your hands up!!!! This is the police of the Slums!!!! Come out!!!!
That wasn’t good. The man on the loud-speaker was obviously wasted. Most of the police probably were. Though someone was flying a helicopter… so someone was high. Rorschach knew that they were too high to shoot at him from the helicopter, so he headed to the roof. Once there, he made his way across it and jumped through to the next building. He didn’t quite make it and crashed through the window and onto the bed of two people doing something… He ran out of their apartment and up to their roof. Once there, he kept running from roof to roof. But, then he hit the last building, the street was the only place to go. A group of cops were coming (and gaining) on him. They had been following him from roof to roof for awhile now. Rorschach started shooting at them. He killed ten cops before he was shot. Someone sober cop hit him with a rifle shell. Rorschach fell the 50 feet the ground. He grabbed onto the building as he fell, but that only slowed him down. He landed on a cop car…
Rorschach looked up. He saw the sky, and a helicopter. He fell onto a car, but he had slowed himself down on the building, so he wasn’t too hurt. But, he had taken a rifle shell to the chest. That hurt him… Rorschach got up and off the car. He was then jumped by a gang of cops. But he fought his way through them. He got out of the crowd and unclad his wrist-blades. He started stabbing many of the cops. He eventually took out the whole group. He even took out the new ones that came to take him in. Then, the helicopter started to land. It landed and came to a complete stop. Hurm… said Rorschach. The police captain got out and said Rorschach was under arrest. Rorschach threw hit knife in the captain’s chest, killing him. He then killed everyone on the helicopter and threw their bodies off board. He knew how to fly a helicopter and started it up and got into the sky. He headed towards Manhattan.
Once there, he headed straight for the Museum of Natural History (the only museum he knew of in Manhattan). He crashed right through the window. He jumped out as the helicopter collided with the T-Rex on display.
Nite-Owl rolled out of the way as soon as the helicopter came through the window. He had chased the owner of the museum (one Baton Tinky) into the Dinosaur display. He caught up with him and started to question him, until the helicopter came through the window. Rorschach jumped out of the helicopter. He grabbed Nite-Owl and said: Are you the one I’m looking for!!!??? No said Nite-Owl, he is pointing to Tinky. His face turned white as he saw Rorschach. Tinky tired to crawl away but Rorschach grabbed him. Tinky said: I don’t know anything I swear!!! Rorschach busted his nose and it all came out. Ok, ok… I-I know that something going down in Washington soo-on and it deals with the president: said Tinky. Hurm… mumbled Rorschach. Nite-Owl said: How does this concern the president?? I don’t know, but somehow it does… the Commies gonna try something when he goes back to Washington… they gonna try something Tinky said. Are you sure?? Nite-Owl said. Swear on my life said Tinky. Rorschach then shot him in the head. Nite-Owl said: What the hell’d you do that for??? Rorschach said: He was no longer needed… So I got rid of him… heh heh, funny actually… so what do we do now??? Nite-Owl said: You’re crazy, but I guess we figure out what’s going down in Washington. Rorschach suggested they both go to Washington. Nite-Owl said: I gotta check with someone first… Who your wife? Sandra? Or should I say Laurie Juspeczyk?? Right, Samuel or should I say Daniel Dreiberg??? said Rorschach. Nite-Owl looked stunned and said: I-I don-n’t know what yo-your talking about… Rorschach said that he knew who he was, as he had spied on him when he was Nite-Owl III in the 1990’s. Nite-Owl sat down and said: What are we gonna do now??? Rorschach replied: Get some f*cking JUSTICE!!!!!
Hope you like it… Part 3 and 4 (together as one) will be up next week maybe…