British Batman Series 1 Episode 2

This is the continutation of my British Batman tv series which is like an Elseworld's comic for the small screen. I have a few episodes ready but I'm going to put them out every few days. This is the story for episode 2 and here is the new addition to the fan cast. To see the first one use thislink: 
http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/Guido/news/?a=101085
My choice for Harvey Dent/Two Face is  Adewale Akinnuoye-Agbaje

He has played so many villanous roles over his career so he is well expierianced and has the ability to pull off this character. Also, he actually has a law degree so he will certainly be able to handle playing the lawer Harvey Dent. On top of this I wanted a Two Face who looks more of a match for Batman and he certainly looks this way more than any previous incarnation.

Opening scene is Bruce in pursuit of a man down an alley at night. We see glimpses of his face and flash backs that show him as Bruce’s parents’ killer. He thinks that he’s got away when Bruce jumps out of the shadows and kicks him in the face. The man pulls a gun but Bruce disarms him and gives him a beating saying “I’m not going to kill you. Killing and guns they’re for cowards! And I’m coming for every single one of you!” He goes to Tommy who is in a coma and tells him he’s leaving Gotham. Alfred tells Bruce that’s it’s best for him to leave. We see a young Detective Gordon go out on a drugs raid, he is offered a bribe but refuses it.

Tommy wakes from his coma to find that Bruce has left. He joins the Penguin’s gang as he wants to learn to use guns. During this there is a montage, not so much a traditional one but contrasting some of Bruce and Tommy’s training along with Gordon and Dent convicting criminals. Fast forward a few years and the Penguin says to Tommy “A Detective Gordon has been causing trouble, not playing by the rules. I want you to break him in for me.”

Tommy ambushes Gordon’s team and kills several officers (none have guns, this is Britain) before getting to Gordon who he shoots in the shoulder whilst his gang members wait in a car. Gordon tries to fight him but the injury makes it hard he demands “Who are you?” and Tommy just whispers “Hush”. A hand smashes the car window and pulls a gangster out, Batman has arrived and beats up the 3 of them. He goes after Hush and a rooftop chase begins that ends with Hush getting away (he knows he’s Tommy because of his voice and movements).

The next day the papers have reports of many people seeing what they are calling “Batman” in Gotham and the Police are hunting for the man. Gordon is saying they should be pursuing the real criminals but is ignored, Harvey Dent is campaigning for the police to carry guns. The Penguin calls Tommy in and is angry that he didn’t kill Batman and demands that he does it. He gathers some guns and put on a mask so Bruce doesn’t see who he is.

The Penguin’s men are smuggling guns into the port and Batman has worked out the delivery is happening stops it but then Hush gets there too. They fight and Hush makes reckless decision leading to him injuring himself, with it finishing up on top of a very high crane over the water. Hush is out of ammo, bleeding heavily and swaying so Batman shouts “Tommy, I know it’s you, we need to get you to a doctor. You’re dying” Tommy realises he’s Bruce and shouts “It’s not worth it Bruce!” before he collapses and falls into the water.

Thanks for reading. More episodes will follow.