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Galactic Earth A.D
Creator: Tyler Goldie
SECTOR 7
One of the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. Underground Cities
2512 A.D
6:00am
“The Anniversary.”
SETTING:
IT IS 500 YEARS AFTER THE LAST WAR ON EARTH. THE SURFACE HAS BEEN WIPED OUT, CONQUERED, AND REBUILT IN THE WRAITHIANS IMAGE. THE LAST EXISTENCE OF THE HUMAN RACE HAS BEEN FORCED TO START A NEW CIVILIZATION DEEP UNDERGROUND WITH A PROTECTIVE SCREEN OFF OF THE WRAITHIANS RADAR. THIS MORNING IS THE START OF THE 500TH YEAR ANNIVERSARY SINCE THE WRAITHIANS CONQUERED OVER THE EARTH. ALL OF THE HUMANS IN SECTOR 7 ARE HUDDLED IN A LARGE CROWD AROUND THE S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. TOWER HOLDING CANDLES AND PRAYING AND CHANTING.
PANEL 1: THE HUMANS ARE HOLDING EACH OTHER’S HANDS, PRAYING, AND CHANTING. EVERYONE IS REASSURING EACH OTHER THAT EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OK.
PANEL 2: A SPEAKER GETS OUT OF THE CROWD AND STANDS UP ON A STAND PREPARED TO SAY A FEW WORDS IN REGARDS OF TODAY. HE PUTS HIS HANDS IN THE AIR AND SAYS:
Speaker:
Everyone! We are gathered here to commemorate the 500th year of our exile from the surface. It is also not to our surprise that we wake up this morning without the sun again.
Panel 3: side shot of the speaker looking out at the crowd. The speaker responds as to something he’s never noticed before by saying:
Speaker:
And when I think about it, none of us here know what it’s like to wake up to the sun.
Panel 4: Shot of the crowd holding their candles. The Speaker tells the crowd now with disgust.
Speaker:
To wake up and walk out the door and feel the air or rain, or possibly even a snow storm.
Panel 5: Another shot of the crowd.
Speaker:
No, we don’t know what it is to feel basic human moralities that we should be able to feel on a daily bases, but there is something that we do have…
Panel 6: The speaker tells the crowd as to uplift their spirits.
Speaker:
Faith…faith in ourselves, and most importantly faith in the future
Panel 7: Shot of the crowd, when the speaker says:
Speaker:
The future that is in store for us is a future above the surface. One without poverties and dictatorships.
Panel 9: Faraway shot of the speaker and the crowd.
Speaker:
Believe me when I say that our S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. Resistance has big plans for our salvation.
Panel 10: Closer shot of the Speaker.
Speaker: Their plans will ultimately win us back! the surface.
Panel 11: Shot of the crowd.
Speaker: So before we go on with our own private methods of mourning today, keep this in mind every time you feel that hope is diminished…
Panel 12: Close up shot of the speaker.
Speaker: This will be the last! time we mourn ever again.
Panel 13: far away shot of the crowd of people still there.
Panel 14: The shot pulls away from the crowd of people in the street and we see the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. tower at the middle of Sector 7.
Commander:
Do you see what I see sergeant?
Sergeant:
What?
Panel 15: The shot zoom’s in on the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. tower.
Commander: I see only a memory.
Sergeant: I know commander; in a few short weeks this all will become the past.
Panel 16: The shot zoom’s in a little more.
Commander: Yes, and we will be watching over a city from this terrace with a sky over our head
Sergeant: Soon we’ll be able to commence forward to ensure this dream happens.
Panel 17: Zoom’s in all the way.
Commander: More than we think, just as soon as the bio chemist arrives.
S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. Tower
“Awaiting the arrival of the Director of Technology, and the Head of the Science Division.”
Panel 18: The commander and the sergeant are looking out at the city leaning up against the terrace railing.
Commander: How soon can we expect his arrival?
Sergeant: As soon as the SRF squad team extracts him from the Wraithian city, we uploaded the coordinates to his exact pinpointed location in the squad teams’ gauntlet data input devices
Commander: Excellent work Sergeant.
Panel 19: A side shot of their faces looking out at the city. With great depth and importance the commander says:
Commander: I was earlier informed that he is needed for a great importance; he is the last piece of the puzzle.
Sergeant: That’s true commander, which is why I’ve picked one of the top ranked SRF squad teams to carry out this rescue mission.
Panel 20: Other side shot of the Commander and the Sergeant looking out at the city.
Commander: And their definitely needed to carry it out. Ensuring the safety of that biochemist is everything, without him you can forget this dream we have.
Panel 21: The sergeant looks at him and says:
Sergeant: That dream will come true commander; we just have to have faith.
Panel 22: The commander is looking at his watch when he says’s:
Commander: True we need faith, but the commanding board also wants to see results in the process.
Panel 23: At that moment the Commander says that remark the Director of technology and the Head of the Science division walk in to the meeting room. They walk through the door when the Director of technology says:
D.O.T: And they will commander…
Panel 24: The Commander turns around with relief to see them standing in the double door way.
Head of the Science Division: Forgive our absence, we would have gotten here sooner but we’ve both been just extremely busy…
Panel 25: The commander and the sergeant step off the terrace and into the meeting room. The meeting room is a mediocrely large room with a cliché like table with chairs all around it. The commander puts his hand up at them and says:
Commander: Save it, your absence is understood and very respected at that matter.
Panel 26: The Commander and the Sergeant are walking closer to the table.
Panel 27: They pull out the chairs and sit down.
Commander: I’ve just been waiting to see the final designs of the components and the research report on the Wraithians bio-energy breakdown. We need to make sure everything is perfect before we share this information with the Commanding board.
Panel 28: The D.O.T moves to the other side of the table. While he’s walking to the other side of the table he says:
D.O.T: Very well Commander, as you were told a few weeks ago, we had some redesigning to do to correct the triggering mechanism malfunction.
Panel 29: The Commander and the sergeant are sitting on the other side of the table waiting to see the final designs.
D.O.T: And just recently we were able to come up with a concept that is finally complete.
Panel 30: The D.O.T sticks the Chip in the side of the table and gets ready to make the announcement and introduce the final concept idea for the components by saying:
(He says while he’s stick the chip in the side of the table.)
D.O.T: I believe your gunna’ love this sir.
Panel 31: The D.O.T gets ready to make the announcement and introduce the final concept idea for the components by saying:
(He says as an announcement.)
D.O.T: Commander…Sergeant. The final components, for project “take down”.
Panel 32: Once the D.O.T clicks the button on the remote, a holographic projection comes up above the table’s center core. It shows the component that attaches to the Wraithians core generator, and next to the component it gives off arithemia’s and engineering calculations regarding the component.
Panel 33: The Commander and the Sergeant rise from their chairs and looks at it closer. As their getting a closer look at the holographic projection, the D.O.T is explaining the finally features of the Component and saying:
(He explains the corrections the tech division made to the component.)
D.O.T: The triggering mechanism wasn’t fully operational to perform its purpose. To trigger off the Wraithians bio-energy and reverse the particle output to an input flow, we needed to recog the sensors double the original amount.
Panel 34: The Commander and the Sergeant are listening carefully as the D.O.T is explaining the new component.
D.O.T: Also, the latch device is multiplied its clink exponentially. Making it virtually impossible for any! one to pull it off once the component starts draining the Wraithians bio-energy from their core generator.
Panel 35: Once the D.O.T turns off the holographic projection, the commander and sergeant look straight at him.
D.O.T: Once the bio-energy starts its flow into the component, the component will have the power to drain out entire cities in a matter of seconds…
Panel 36: The commander looks at the sergeant with a smirk and the sergeant looks down and smiles, the D.O.T is still talking to them.
D.O.T: And not to mention the triggering mechanism will coexist with the particle input to the component. Without their energy, they won’t stand a chance against our SRF’s.
Panel 37: The commander starts a small clap. And with a seriously pleased smile on his face he says:
Commander: Outstanding work, from hearing this, it kind of sounds like project “take down” is almost ready. But, even with all this outstanding work the tech division has provenly preformed…
Panel 38: The Commander looks directly at the Head of S.D and says very curiously:
Commander: There’s other intel we need to inform the commanding board about as well.
Panel 39: The Head of S.D is standing on the other side of the table and says:
Head of S.D: Absolutely commander, the bio-energy is a lot more complex that we even realized.
Panel 40: The Head of S.D pulls out the tech’s chip and puts in the research report chip to present to the commander and the sergeant.
Head of S.D: Commander, I’ve explained to you that the bio-chemist is needed to regulate a certain particle; well this should help you to visualize what I’m talking about.
Panel 41: The Head of S.D pushes the button on the remote and a holographic projection appears again in the middle of the table. The holographic projection is showing is the Wraithians bio-energy as a molecular ever changing substance with cosmic currents running through it. On the sides shows calculations and schematic charts of its extreme toxicity. As the Commander and the sergeant are looking at the holograph, the Head of S.D opens and says:
Head of S.D: Our team of leading experts in molecular and chemical research and developers has found many different cosmic particles that are manageable to control from our side.
Panel 42: The Commander looks over at the Head of S.D and says:
Commander: The bio-energy particles that are needed to trigger the reversing effect on the component?
Panel 43: The Head of S.D points the remote at the Holographic projection.
Head of S.D: No sir, that’s the bio-chemists expertise, which starts here.
Panel 44: The holographic projection zoom’s in a little more into the bio-energy’s formation and reveals the inside of the bio energy.
Head of S.D: As you can see Commander, the particle that ultimately gives the Wraithians their energy supply possessed a staggeringly uncontrollable dose of an energy source that we have never came across before.
Panel 45: The head of S.D pushes the button on the remote again and the holographic projection zoom’s in a more into the bio-energy’s formation to reveal the unknown particle that the bio-chemist is needed for.
Head of S.D: As you can see, this particle is combined with an unknown cosmic energy source that is impossible to uncalculate.
Panel 46: The Commander looks at the Head of S.D and says:
Commander: How impossible?
Head of S.D: The calculations are so complex that even some interdimensional beings couldn’t even crack it.
Panel 47: Shot of the Head of S.D talking back to the commander:
Head of S.D: There’s only being known that was able to uncalculate it, and he did so from inside enemy territory. He’s still there right now.
Panel 48: Shot of the commander.
Commander: The bio chemist.
Head of S.D: Precisely, without the bio chemist the particles won’t coexist with the component.
Panel 49: Shot of the Head of S.D:
Head of S.D: We need his help in harnessing the particle or else the results won’t only co side a failure with project “take down”, but the results can also be catastrophic.
Panel 50: The Sergeant immediately jumps into the conversation curiously saying:
Sergeant: How catastrophic?
Panel 51: The D.O.T looks at the Head of S.D with seriousness.
Panel 52: The Head of S.D looks at the D.O.T as if to say I know, he puts his head slightly down and rubs his eyes. Then immediately looks at the commander and says in a soft voice:
Head of S.D: The bio-energy also possess’ enormous! amounts of plutonium.
Panel 53: After hearing this, the Commander looks at the bio-energy holographic projection and puts his hand over his mouth worried and curious. The Head of S.D further explains and says:
Head of S.D: If one little miss calculation is put into the process of draining out the bio-energy through the component…It can activate the plutonium causing a big enough nuclear blast to destroy everything above and below.
Panel 54: The Sergeant looks at the commander and waits to hear what he has to say.
Panel 55: The commander walks away from the table and heads back out to the terrace.
Panel 56: The Sergeant follows behind him saying:
Sergeant: The commanding board is going to want to hear about this. We should inform them of the urgency of…
Panel 57: The Commander looks back and responds back at him before he can finish the sentence saying:
Commander: Not yet, we wait until the bio-chemist is here to inform them of everything. Telling them now will only have them disbelieve everything were trying to accomplish here.
Sergeant: Commander, maybe they can help assist on his recue?
Panel 58: The commander is now leaning over the terrace looking back out at the underground city, takes a long sigh and then looks at the sergeant anxiously waiting for his response and says to him:
Sergeant: Ye of little faith my friend, one SRF squad team is enough.
WRAITHIAN CAPITAL CITY A FEW 100 MILES AWAY FROM SECTOR 7
2516 A.D
7:55am
“500th year celebration”
SETTING:
The Wraithian city is surrounded by tall black futuristic and savage like skyscrapers with red beaming lights at the top of various buildings, and red lights surging through every building showing that the bio-energy is empowering their entire existence. Outside the sun is covered in dark grey and white clouds and rain falls heavily down upon their sinful parties in the streets.
Panel 59: At the lower leveled buildings, Wraithian guards are mandating the perimeter watching over the festivities, and watching out for any human detection. One of the Wraithian guards standing watch atop the corner of one of the buildings, contact another guard:
Wraithian Guard: See anything?
(On the communicator.)
Wrathian Guard: Nope, everything’s clear, just keep an eye out for…
Panel 60: The Wraithian guard on the communicator goes out; the other wraithian guard atop the building curiously tries to get him to respond and says:
Wraithian guard: Hello? Hello, what happened?
ARGH!!!
Panel 61: The both of the wraithian guards have been ghosted by the team leader of the SRF’s using his grappling hooks to drag them over the side of the building.
Panel 62: The team leader, Jeremy Bowen of the SRF squad team, hops over on top of the building, and calls in through his gauntlet to check for the other SRF’s to validate the perimeter’s conditions. He asks:
Jeremy: What’s the situation like over there F-2?
Panel 63: F-2 on the other side of the Gauntlet is dangling on the top of the building.
Panel 64: F-2 that’s dangling from the side of the building notices two guards across from him about 4 floors lower than him. He tells Jeremy:
F-2: I’ll tell ya’ in a second.
Panel 65: F-2 that was dangling off the rim of the building flips on top of the roof. Runs back from away from the edge heading in one direction and the moves faster towards the edge of the building and leaps off into an aerial face first dive and darts straight down fists forward on top of the wraithian guards, grabs them by their shoulders, flips with the guards, and launches them into 2 other wraithian guards on the other side of the building. F-2 gets on his communicator and says:
F-2: East of the perimeter is contained, waiting your next move Jeremy.
Panel 66: Jeremy calls in to check on F-3 of the squad team to check the west of the perimeter.
Jeremy: What’s it like on the west F-3…
Panel 67: Jeremy is getting no response. Jeremy speaks deeper into the gauntlet with more intensity:
Jeremy: Talk to me F-3 dammit, what’s it like on the west perimeter?!
Panel 68: F-3 is running along the side of the building, flip dives off landing and sliding on a railing facing on a slant downward. When he reaches the end of the railing he launches himself forward over the Wraithians celebrating in the streets. F-3 still flying forward is looking backwards and instantly shoots out his grappling hook zipping himself the opposite direction barely missing the Wraithians below him, ofcourse they don’t detect him.
Panel 69: F-3 who just shot out his grappling hook zipping himself swiftly and fast the opposite direction is now darting the other direction through the air face first.
Panel 70: Two Wraithian guards not knowing what’s coming gives thumbs up that everything is ok on their watch.
Panel 71: F-3 spirals down and lands on top of the one Wraithian guards, flips and shoots his grappling hook from his other Gaunlet at the other Guard. He reels him in and hangs both of them off the building.
Panel 72: F-3 gets on his communicator and responds to Jeremy:
F-3: West of the perimeter is contained Jeremy, waiting for your next call.
Panel 73: Jeremy checks on F-4 who’s securing the south of the Perimeter.
Jeremy: What’s going on down there F-4?
Panel 74: F-4 is Running on a roof that’s about 6 stories high.
Panel 75: F-4 leaps face first with his hands spread out free falling at least 4 stories before shooting his grappling hook behind him.
Panel 76 Inside the building F-4 shot his grappling hook into has a large opening through the building leaving at least 2 to 3 floors open for him to swing straight through the building before releasing his grappling hook.
Panel 77: F-4 is flung across the way feet first kicking two of the Wraithian guards on top of 4 story building off across from the building he just swung off of.
Panel 78: F-4 still flying through the air performs an aerial back flip and crashes on top of another wraithian guard feet first on top of another 2 story building across from the 4 story building.
Panel 79: After taking out the three Wraithian guards, F-4 opens up his right gauntlet and a holographic projection opens up with a holographic layout of the whole perimeter they just contained surrounding the bio-chemists whereabouts inside the watch tower in the middle of the city within a 900 ft. radius. In red it shows the 9 only Wraithian guards within the perimeter that were taken out. On the side of the perimeters layout in the holographic projection, a light grid goes from red to green giving that the entire perimeter has been contained. Once F-4 see’s that the perimeter has been contained. He contacts Jeremy on the gauntlet communication saying:
F-4: South of the perimeter is contained; we have the green light to move in on the extraction point.
Panel 80: Jeremy is still atop the roof on his communicator inside his gauntlet. Jeremy contacts F-5 to gain further information and says:
Jeremy: Stand by F-4…
Jeremy: F-5, give me the ground up structure reading on the watch tower, locate the extraction point.
Panel 81: F-5 is crouched inside a corner atop one of the buildings closest to the watch tower.
Panel 82: F-5 opens up his right gauntlet and immediately a holographic projection appears in blue of the watch tower and a few surrounding lower leveled buildings. Within the watch tower appearing in blue in the holographic projection, 100’s upon 100’s of Wraithian Guards are patrolling through the watch tower appearing in glowing red. While F-5 is searching through the structure reading of the watch tower, he cannot locate the extraction point of the bio chemist.
Panel 83: F-5 flicks his fingers upwards above the structure reading of the watch tower and the building scrolls up, we get a view of the big underground core generator room unit along with other underground basements of the surrounding the watch tower. Again in the core generator room, F-5 see’s Wraithian guards surrounding the generator room in glowing red, Wrathian scientists are glowing in green, and the biochemist is inside the core generator room is glowing in bright yellow. Once F-5 locates the biochemist and the extraction point, he picks up his other gauntlet on the other forearm and uses his communicator device to contact team leader Jeremy, he says to him:
F-5: Located the extraction point in the core generator room under the structure, the watch tower is also heavily sedated with Wrathian guards.
Panel 84: Jeremy is contacting his entire squad team saying:
Jeremy: Alright everyone, the precious cargo is being held captive in there. We have only a few minutes to get ‘em out before Wraithian warriors in the streets are alerted.
Panel 85: F-4 is on his communicator device and asks Jeremy:
F-4: What’s the plan? You wanna’ take the roof?
(On the communicator device)
Jeremy: Absolutely, we take to the roof, continue with stealth.
Panel 86: F-4 is pauses for a second and looks at his Gauntlet communicator device curiously, he picks it back up to his mouth and says:
F-4: You sure ‘bout this? F-5 just gave us the word that the watch tower is crawling with guards.
Jeremy: Exactly, guards not warriors. Their much easier to handle. Besides you don’t really have to worry about the Guards.
Panel 87: Jeremy is talking to F-4 on his Gauntlet communicator device:
Jeremy: While were containing each floor from the roof down, your objective is to override and gain access to the elevation shaft taking it to the extraction point, its smooth sailing.
Panel 88: F-4 is shaking his head and perching his mouth saying:
F-4: Ya’ that sounds a little better.
Jeremy: Once F-4 has a grasp on the precious cargo…
Panel 89: Shot of Jeremy on his gauntlet communication device saying:
Jeremy: we reconvene on the roof and make our way back to SECTOR 7.
Panel 90: F-2 is waiting for the next word from Jeremy:
Jeremy: Ok, let’s move.
Panel 91 F-2 get’s up and starts charging for the edge of the building, he reaches the end and leaps off and grabs a hold of the next building about 20 feet across and about 2 stories higher. Once grabs hold of the rim of the buildings and right on contact flips over it and charges for the next edge of the building.
Panel 92: He leaps atop a stepping pedestal about 15 ft. high and leaps off again and shoots his grappling hook across from him into a building about 4 to 5 stories higher. Once he shoots out his grappling hook, he starts zipping himself upward towards the top.
Panel 93: He hits the building and as he’s zipping himself up he’s running to the left of the building. Right before he reaches the top of the building he leaps forward on top of a building about 10 ft. across and is running along the side of the roof towards the watch tower.
Panel 94: F-3 is running across the roof and dives forward and does a frog flip over a hump and then flips again off the side of the building and free falls about 3 stories.
Panel 95: F-3 hits the ground hard and runs alongside of the building until he reaches the edge, shoots out his grappling hook and zips himself up a 5 story building.
Panel 96: Once F-3 hits the top of the building he continues to be shot up about 15 ft. and flips on top of the building and is running towards the watch tower.
Panel 97: F-4 is running along the roof of a building. Once he reaches the edge of a building, another building stands about 5 ft. in front of him and the building itself is only about 20 ft. long. He leaps off the side of the building totally clearing the building in front of him and dives straight down about 9 stories.
Panel 98: Once F-4 reaches a free fall about 4 stories down, he shoots out his grappling hook and swings right over the Wrathian warriors partying in the streets.
Panel 99: He flies through the air only about 3 seconds and tucks and rolls across the roof of a building about 8 stories. He’s running in the direction of the watch tower.
Panel 100: Jeremy and F-5 are running side by side next to eachother leaping over buildings and heading towards the watch tower.
Panel 101: Right from Jeremy and F-5 running towards the watch tower, we see a full shot of the watch tower.
Panel 102: The shot zoom’s in on the watch tower.
Panel 103: The shot zoom’s in a little more.
Panel 104: The shot zooms in all the way.
The Watch tower
2516 A.D
8:01am
“The Sovereign Commanders Royal Chambers”
SETTING:
The Sovereign Commander and ruler of the Wraithian nation is standing at the large window looking down at the streets as the Wraithian Warriors are celebrating their 500th anniversary. His hands are folded behind his back as he stands in his royal interstellar garments.
Panel 105: As the Sovereign commander is looking out the window at the festivities in the streets, his second in command and warlord to the Wraithian army and Armada comes walking in the door on the other side of the room expectingly. The Warlord hesitantly says:
Warlord: Permission to enter Sovereign?
Panel 106: The Sovereign commander turns only his head half way behind him and replies:
Sovereign Commander: If you didn’t have the permission, I wouldn’t have called you up here.
Warlord: Forgive me your excellence…
Panel 107: The warlord is walking through the dark and grim room with red bio energy surging lights running through the walls, floor, and ceiling. He says to him as he’s walking:
Warlord: I was merely representing respectfulness.
Panel 108: The Sovereign Commander is still looking to the side waiting for him to attend to the window and stand next to him. The Sovereign commander smirks and replies:
Sovereign Commander: Something I can never deserve enough of.
Panel 109: The Warlord comes and is now standing next to him. He now folds his hands and joins him in looking down at the streets, he replies to him:
Warlord: And that you have deserved it, today is the day of recognizing not only our superiority over the humans, but your tenacity and perseverance.
Panel 110: After the warlord of the army finishes his kiss up comment, the Sovereign commander replies back saying:
Sovereign commander: Yes, and as the humans use to say, actions speak louder than words; I mean just look ‘em.
Panel 112: The Wraithian warriors are in the streets consuming alcoholic and drug based substances, dancing around, laughing and joking, performing sinful sexual activities right out in the open to show their freedom to do as they please. The Sovereign commander finishes what he was saying:
Sovereign Commander: Hungry for flesh and thirsty for blood. And all of us, no matter the rank, are bread to strive for one thing.
Panel 113: As the Sovereign commander is giving his honorably horrid speech, the Wraithian warriors are carrying out skulls from human remains they have been keeping for this particular occasion and sticking them on spikes in the ground. The sovereign commander continues onward saying:
Sovereign Commander: The dominance over life.
Panel 114: Another shot of the Wraithians just going crazy in the streets as the Sovereign commander narrates over the panel:
Sovereign Commander: All life everywhere. Throughout every galaxy, every dimension, every universe.
Panel 115: Another shot of the Wraithians just going crazy in the streets as the Sovereign commander narrates over the panel:
Sovereign Commander: Putting an end to life is our code of conduct, which brings only one thing to mind.
Panel 116: The Sovereign commander and his second in command warlord are standing next to each other looking down at the streets filled with Wrathian warriors. The Sovereign commander goes on saying:
Sovereign Commander: The war for this planet is still not over.
Panel 117: After the sovereign commander finishes his statement, the warlord looks over at him curiously and responds:
Warlord: Sovereign, the war is over and the humans have lost, we have the dominated the surface.
Panel 118: The Sovereign commander looks over at him and questions him saying:
Sovereign commander: Do you even not know what true dominance is?
Panel 119: The warlord pauses for a minute to hesitant to respond back to the sovereign commander.
Panel 120: The Sovereign commander walks away from the window and back deeper into his dark and grim chambers, as he’s walking on the floor glowing red surging lights are pressing down as he walks. While the Sovereign commander is walking away from the window, he begins to explain to the warlord still standing at the window looking back at him what his idea of dominance is by saying:
Sovereign commander: You have said it yourself a few moments ago my friend, we only contain superiority over them.
Panel 121: The Sovereign commander is still walking away from the window.
Sovereign Commander: But in truth, if we really! dominated this planet. There shouldn’t be anything to have superiority over! right now.
Panel 122: The Warlord is walking away from the window and following him to his watch chair. The Sovereign commander continues on saying:
Sovereign commander: The humans remain breathing below the surface, meaning our victory only forced them into self enslavement.
Panel 123: The Sovereign commander sits in his watch chair that surges with bio energy. The sovereign sits down and leans forward. He continues to talk saying:
Sovereign Commander: Slavery is a sign of weakness, and an inability to fully defeat the enslaved. Death is the only defeat…
Panel 124: The Sovereign pauses for a second and sits all the way back and looks at him with a weird and sadistically happy look and says:
Sovereign commander: Death is the only dominance.
Panel 125: The SRF squad team is zip lining up the side of the watch tower. The warlord responds to the sovereign commander saying:
Warlord: That would only be possible if we were able to pinpoint their exact locations to their underground sectors.
Panel 126: The SRF squad team is running up the side of the building and zipping up, the SRF squad team is 100’s of feet above the surface towards the top. The sovereign commander understandably says to the warlord:
Sovereign commander: Yes I have noticed that…
Panel 127: The Sovereign commander is still sitting back in his bio energy charged watch chair and the warlord is standing in front of him with his arms folded behind his back, the Sovereign commander finishes his sentence saying:
Sovereign commander: they have proven themselves a far less primitive race than we could’ve known. They’ve been able to accomplish keeping us unaware of their whereabouts for 500 years.
Panel 128: The warlord is standing and listening carefully.
Sovereign commander: But there’s a reason I have called you up here. I may have found someone to help us with that problem.
Panel 129: The warlord begins to get curious and responds:
Warlord: Who?
Panel 130: The SRF squad team is on the roof checking the coast of Wraithian guards on their Structure reading
Sovereign Commander: Step up, I’ll show you.
Panel 131: The Sovereign commander sitting in his watch chair pulls up a holographic key pad and uploads a screen that surrounds them with stars, and radiation clouds, the warlord is walking around the chair looking at the stars curiously.
Sovereign commander: For quite some time I have been searching through the stars for someone we can use to our advantage.
Sovereign Commander: From distance dimensions from quadrant zelpha to galaxies throughout the rephet.
Panel 132: The SRF’s are inside the Watch tower, F-2 and F-3 override the Wraithians Security scanner radar’s and switch on their protective fields making them invisible to their screenings.
Sovereign Commander: The being that I speak of is a spy for hire. Very skilled and very dangerous!
Panel 133: The sovereign commander is sitting in his chair talking to the warlord as the he’s walking around looking at the holographic stars.
Sovereign Commander: Rumor has it that he actually was paid to have two planets fight with eachother, he succeeded by having them destroy themselves in a matter of a few week loads.
Panel 133: F-4 is ghosting everyone on the other side of the top floor making his way to the Elevation shaft.
Warlord: And where does this inter being hail from?
Panel 134: F-4 is standing at the Elevation shaft; he uses his decoder on his gauntlet to gain access to the Elevation shaft.
Sovereign commander: I wasn’t able to locate his place of origin; it’s nowhere to be found in any archive throughout any! galaxy.
Panel 135: The SRF squad team is ghosting everyone throughout the floors and halls.
Warlord: So he’s a nobody?
Panel 136: F-4 is hovering above in the elevation shaft, he shoots his grappling hook above in the ceiling and starts his decent, the Sovereign commander explains to the warlord:
Sovereign commander: He may not have a set history but he has developed a name for himself. The only collective information I was able to pull was his crime records, get this.
Panel 137: The sovereign commander and the warlord are looking at his holographic crime reports and mugshots:
Sovereign commander: He doesn’t have a birth name; he only goes by his Alias: The Chameleon.
Sovereign Commander:
Over 40 counts of 3rd degree murder, multiple vehicular theft through 12 different planets from quadrants Rellick to bodaiga. And this one really caught my eye; he was able to impersonate the warden of one of the most heavily guarded prisons throughout the stars to gain access to their most dangerous prisoner’s profiles.
PANEL 138: THE SRF’S ARE STILL GHOSTING WRAITHIAN GUARDS:
Warlord:
Sounds like we should have him start effective immediately.
PANEL 139: F-4 CUTS AN OPENING IN THE AIR DUCT INSIDE THE ELEVATION SHAFT AND ENTERS IN IT.
Sovereign commander:
Now’s not the time…
PANEL 140: F-4 IS IN THE AIR DUCT LOOKING THROUGH AN OPENING. HE RUNS A PERIMETER CHECK TO SCAN FOR WRAITHIAN GUARDS. HE LOCATES THE BIO CHEMIST IN YELLOW,
Sovereign Commander:
We need to ensure a combination of perfection and cunningness to prevent suspicion from our enemy.
(He says to himself.)
F-4:
There he is.
PANEL 141: F-4 IS GHOSTING GUARDS DOWN CORE GENERATOR ROOM GHOSTING EVERYONE STICKING TO THE SHADOWS.
Warlord:
What do you have in mind?
PANEL 142: A WRAITHIAN GUARD IS WALKING THROUGH THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM.
PANEL 143: HE NOTICES A HAND STICKING OUT OF ONE OF THE SHADOWS, WALKS OVER TO IT.
PANEL 144: HE NOTICES IT’S A WRAITHIAN GUARD.
Sovereign commander:
We wait for a loophole.
PANEL 145: THE WRAITHIAN GUARD TURNS AROUND AND SCREAMS:
Wraithian Guard:
HUMANS!!!!!!!!
PANEL 146: THE GUARDS PREPARE THEMSELVES LOOKING AROUND THE ROOM.
PANEL 147: F-4 IS HIDING IN THE SHADOWS LOOKING OVER.
PANEL 148: HE LAUNCHES HIMSELF ABOUT 20 FEET IN THE AIR AND LANDS ON TOP OF TWO WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
PANEL 150: A WRAITHIAN GUARD HAS SPOT’S F-4:
Wraithian Guard:
There’s one! HOLD IT RIGHT THERE!
PANEL 151: F-4 SHOOTS HIS GRAPPLING HOOK INTO HIS FACE AND SWINGS HIM HARD INTO 3 OTHER WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
PANEL 152: F-4 STARTS RUNNING TOWARDS THE BIO CHEMIST, WHILE THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS ARE RUNNING AND BLASTING AFTER HIM.
PANEL 153: F-4 HEADING UP THE MIDDLE WHEN A BUNCH OF WRAITHIAN GUARDS STOP IN FRONT OF HIM.
PANEL 154: F-4 GET’S SURROUNDED BY THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
Wraithian Guard:
Don’t move! Stay right where you are!
PANEL 155: F-4 PUTS HIS HANDS BEHIND HIS HEAD. ONE OF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS SPEAKS UP:
Wraithian Guard:
You think your race is so incredible and great?
PANEL 156: F-4 MOVES HIS HANDS OVER HIS BODY SYMILTANIOUSLY; THE WRAITHIAN GUARD SPEAKS UP AGAIN:
Wraithian Guard:
I don’t see anything worthy of greatness.
PANEL 157: F-4 MOVES HIS HANDS OUT TO HIS SIDES WITH HIS EYES CLOSED; THE WRATHIAN GUARD SPEAKS UP ONCE AGAIN:
Wraithian Guard:
Let’s see your greatness?
PANEL 158: F-4 STILL WITH HIS HANDS, PULLS HIS HANDS INTO HIS FACE WHILE HIS FISTS ARE FACED IN THE AIR AND RECTRACTS HIS GAUNTLET BLASTERS.
PANEL 159: EVERYONE CROUCHES DOWN AND AIMS THEIR BLASTERS AT HIM MORE INSTENSLY.
PANEL 160: F-4 LOOKS AT THEM COCKILY AND SAYS:
F-4:
Ok.
Panel 161: F-4 STANDS UP AND AIMS HIS GAUNTLET BLASTER AT THE WRAITHIAN, A LIGHT HIGH PITCHED SOFT CHARGE UP SOUND COMES FROM THE GAUNTLET.
PANEL 162: THE WRAITHIAN GUARD GETS HIS HEAD BLOWN OFF BUT NOT BY F-4.
PANEL 163: JEREMY AND THE OTHER SRF’S LEAP ABOUT 15 FEET IN THE AIR BLASTING AWAY AND LAND RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
PANEL 164: THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS AND THE SRF’S ARE FIGHTING EACHOTHER IN AN ALL OUT BATTLE.
PANEL 165: UP IN THE ROYAL CHAMBERS, A WRAITHIAN GUARD COMES RUSHING INTO THE ROOM OUT OF BREATHE TO ALERT THEM OF THE SITUATION:
Wraithian guard:
Downstairs! In the core generator room! S.U.V.I.V.O.R.S.!
PANEL 166: THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER AND THE WARLORD BECOME ALERTED BY THE NEWS. THE WARLORD SPEAKS UP AND SAYS:
Warlord:
Do we have confirmation of their reasons for recon?!
Wraithian Guard:
No sir.
PANEL 167: THE WRAITHIAN GUARD IS STILL OUT OF BREATHE.
Wraithian Guard:
They shot first, didn’t have time to ask questions.
PANEL 168: THE WARLORD GIVES HIM INSTRUCTIONS:
Warlord:
Get the word to the warriors, have them prepared to…
(He cuts him off.)
Wraithian Guard:
We tried that, our security systems have already been compromised.
PANEL 169: THEY SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SITS BACK IN HIS CHAIR AND TRIES TO OPEN UP THE SECURITY RADAR SCREENS.
Sovereign Commander:
Exactly what I am talking about warlord, they put their fields over our security mainframes
PANEL 170: THE WARLORD SPEAKS UP URGENTLY:
Warlord:
Can we over ride it?!
Sovereign commander:
No, they would succeed they’re mission before we can break through their protective fields.
PANEL 171: THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS TO THE WARLORD:
Sovereign commander:
You better get down there. Your gunna’ have to contain the situation yourself.
(He says smiling.)
Warlord:
Sovereign, it would be my personal pleasure.
PANEL 172: THE WARLORD CHARGES OUT OF THE ROYAL CHAMBERS AND DOWN THE HALL.
PANEL 173: DOWN IN THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM, THE SRF’S AND THE GUARDS ARE STILL FIGHTING.
PANEL 174: JEREMY IS LOOKING AROUND AND CAN’T SPOT THE BIO CHEMIST, HE SCREAMS TO F-4:
Jeremy: F-4, locate the biochemist!
PANEL 175: F-4 LEAPS IN THE AIR AND HIDES IN THE SHADOWS ON A CAT WALK.
PANEL 176: F-4 OPENS HIS GAUNTLET AND RUN’S A PERIMETER CHECK BUT HE CAN’T SEE THE
BIOCHEMIST IN YELLOW. HE CONTACTS JEREMY ON HIS GAUNTLET AND SAY’S:
F-4: The precious cargo has left the extraction point, I don’t have a lock on ‘em.
PANEL 177: JEREMY RUNS TAKES OUT A FEW GUARDS AND HIDES BEHIND AN ELECTRICAL PANEL, JEREMY RESPONDS:
Jeremy: Get a lock on ‘em! We can’t lose ‘em!
PANEL 178: F-4 IS ON HIS GAUNTLET SEARCHING THROUGH IT WHEN HE SAYS:
F-4: Ten steps ahead of ya’.
PANEL 179: JEREMY IS FIGHTING OFF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS WHEN HE SAYS INTO HIS GAUNTLET COMMUNICATOR:
Jeremy: Do we have a visual confirmation?!
F-4: I got ‘em! He’s heading up to the…
PANEL 180: JEREMY IS WAITING FOR F-4 TO FINISH WHAT HE WAS SAYING BUT HE DOESN’T, JEREMY RESPONDS:
F-4: F-4?! F-4 are you there?!
PANEL 181: AS JEREMY IS TRYING TO GET F-4 TO RESPOND, THE WARLORD HAS F-4 IN THE AIR WITH A KNIFE IN HIS BACK.
(On the communicator.)
Jeremy: F-4 what’s the status on the precious cargo?!
PANEL 182: JEREMY IS STILL TRYING TO A GET A RESPONSE FROM F-4:
Jeremy: F-4 respond!
(On the communicator)
PANEL 183: JEREMY LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM AND STARTS FIGHTING OFF WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
PANEL 184: WARLORD LEAPS OFF THE CATWALK AND STARTS HEADING TOWARDS F-3.
PANEL 185: WARLORD LEAPS OVER AN ELECTRICAL PANEL AND POUNCES ON TOP OF HIM, AND CUTS OFF HIS HEAD.
PANEL 186: F-4 COMES UP BEHIND F-4 AND GHOSTS HIM, FOLLOWED BY F-5 UNTIL THEIRS NOONE LEFT BUT JEREMY.
PANEL 187: JEREMY IS FIGHTING THE GUARDS WHEN THE 4 HEADS OF HIS SQUAD TEAM HITS HIM ALL OVER HIS BACK AND BODY.
PANEL 188: EVERYONE STOPS SHOOTING AND STANDS AS GUARDS IN THEIR SPOTS, JEREMY TURNS AROUND AND LOOKS ON THE FLOOR TO SEE HIS DECAPITATED BROTHERS IN ARMS LIEING ON THE FLOOR.
Jeremy:
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PANEL 189: THE WARLORD IN THE NEAR DISTANCE SPEAKS OUT SAYING:
Warlord: Seize him.
PANEL 190: THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS PUT THEIR BLASTERS FACING HIM.
PANEL 191: JEREMY PULLS OUT A PICTURE OF HIM AND HIS BROTHER DAVID WHEN THEY WERE KIDS.
PANEL 192: THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER ENTERS THE ROOM AND IS STANDING ON THE CATWALK WATCHING THE WHOLE THING WITH HIS HANDS FOLDED BEHIND HIS BACK.
PANEL 193: THE WARLORD IS WALKING TOWARDS JEREMY, AS THE WARLORD IS WALKING TOWARDS JEREMY THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS TALKING TO HIMSELF:
Sovereign commander:
One thing will always remain a certainty.
PANEL 194: THE WARLORD IS STANDING OVER JEREMY AND PUTS HIS BIO BLASTER TO HIS HEAD.
PANEL 195: JEREMY TAKES ONE LAST BREATHE AND SAYS:
Jeremy:
I’m sorry David…
PHING BLOOM!
PANEL 196: JEREMY LAYS THEIR DEAD WITH A HOLE IN HIS HEAD. THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER FINISHES:
Sovereign Commander:
Death is the only dominance.
David, Ethan, Virgil, Scarlet, and Yang
11:55am
2512AD
SETTING: David and his SRF team have just takin’ down an entire Wraithian hoard, and now another has come.
PANEL 197: SCARLET, VIRGIL, YANG, AND ETHAN ARE FINISHING OFF THE WRAITHIANS.
Yang:
David went awall!
Ethan:
Again!
PANEL 198: SCARLET TAKES OUT THE LAST WRAITHIAN BY FLIPPING OVER HIM AND BLASTING AWAY HIS BIO PACK AND THEN SNAPPING HIS NECK.
PANEL 199: SCARLET TURNS AROUND WITH CURIOUSITY AND SEE’S ANOTHER WRAITHIAN HOARD TRANSPORT COMING FROM OUT OF THE DISTANCE.
PANEL 200: THE TRANSPORT IS LOCKING IN ON THEIR CURRENT LOCATION.
PANEL: THE WRATHIANS FALL STRAIGHT OUT OF THE BOTTOM OF THE TRANSPORT LAND ABOUT 20 FEET AWAY FROM THEM.
PANEL: ETHAN, VIRGIL, YANG, AND SCARLET ARE IN FORMATION SURROUNDED BY WRAITHIANS.
Yang:
Shit, there’s more this time.
Scarlet:
Watch each other’s 6’s.
Ethan:
This is only gunna’ work if David is here.
Virgil:
Where the hell did he go?
PANEL 198: A WRAITHIAN FALLS OUT OF NOWHERE RIGHT INFRONT OF THEM.
PANEL 199: DAVID FALLS RIGHT BEHIND HIM AND SAYS.
PANEL 200: DAVID STANDS UP AND LOOKS AT THE WRAITIAN WARRIORS WITH VICIOUSNESS
DAVID GETS BACK INTO FORMATION.
Ethan:
Glad ta’ have ya’ back buddy, what’s the gameplan?
PANEL 201: DAVID BRAKES RANK AGAIN AND LEAPS INTO ACTION BY SPIRALING AT THEM BLASTING AWAY.
Virgil:
What da’ hell are you doin’?
PANEL 202: THE REST OF THEM LEAP INTO ACTION AND ARE FIGHTING OFF THE WRAITHIANS, YANG LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
Yang:
Ya’ know, a heads up would’ve been nice!
PANEL 203: ETHAN IS BLASTING AT THEM AND RUNS OUT OF PLASMA. HE ASK’S DAVID FOR ASSISTANCE.
Ethan:
David I’m running dry here throw me a plasma cartridge!
PANEL 204: DAVID IGNORES HIM AND THE WRAITHIANS ARE CLOSING IN ON ETHAN.
PANEL 205: DAVID IS GOING BESERK ON THE WRAITHIANS.
PANEL 206: THEN WRAITHIANS ARE CLOSING IN ON ETHAN A LITTLE MORE.
Ethan: David?!
PANEL 207: THEY’RE ABOUT TO ATTACK.
PHING!
Ethan:
DAVID!!!!
PANEL 208: THE WRAITHIANS BLASTING ETHAN AWAY AND THE BLASTS GO RIGHT THROUGH HIM WITHOUT HURTING HIM. ETHAN SAYS:
Ethan:
Well, there goes our record.
PANEL 209: DAVID IS STANDING THERE LOOKING AT THE REST OF THEM.
PANEL 210: THE REST OF THEM ARE LOOKING AT HIM WITH CURIOUSITY:
PANEL 211: THEN SIRENS GO OFF AND THE SCENERY AND WRAITHIANS DISOLVE AWAY UNVEILING A BIG FUTURISTIC TRAINING ROOM.
PANEL 212: THE DRILL SERGENT COMES WALKING QUICKLY AT THEM:
Drill sergeant:
What the hell! was that?
PANEL 213: DAVID, ETHAN, VIRGIL, SCARLET, AND YANG STAND IN A LINE WITH THE HANDS FOLDED IN FRONT OF THEM.
PANEL 214: THE DRILL SERGEANT IS LOOKING AT THEM UP AND DOWN WALKING BACK AND FORTH.
Drill sergeant:
What do you guys think were doin’? tryin’ out for the cheerleading squad?
PANEL 215: THE SRF TRAINEE’S LOOK AT EACHOTHER.
Drill sergeant:
10 years ago, you were all assigned to eachother to form a squad team.
PANEL 216: THE DRILL SERGEANT IS STILL WALKING UP AND DOWN.
Drill sergeant:
And throughout these 10 years of training, we’ve trained you to work together as a team to ensure mission success and a chance at our survival for just one more day. That was the major focus of concern.
PANEL 217: THE SQUAD TEAM IS STANDING UP STRAIGHT AS A BOARD LISTENING TO WHAT THE DRILL SERGEANT IS SAYING:
DRILL SERGEANT:
You all must stand, together!...Fight as one!
PANEL 218: DAVID IS STANDING THERE MOTIONLESS IN THE LINE AND THE DRILL SERGEANT IS WALKING TOWARDS HIM:
DRILL SERGEANT:
In the heat of battle, each of you must protect the SRF on your right and on your left. And unless absolutely necessary…
PANEL 218: THE DRILL SERGEANT COMES AND STOPS IN FRONT OF DAVID. HE STARES HIM DOWN IN THE FACE AND SAYS:
DRILL SERGEANT:
You should never! Break rank…That might be last thing you ever do.
DAVID LOOKS SLIGHTLY AWAY AND THEN AT THE REST OF THEM.
PANEL 219: THE DRILL SERGEANT WALKS AWAY, TURNS AROUND AND MAKES ONE MORE REMARK:
Drill sergeant:
And for [frick] sake, don’t lose focus.
Drill sergeant:
Cause’ when project “take down” goes into effect, its gunna’ turn a lot! of Wrathian heads…and
When we go to war you may be the last ones standing, and ever decision you guys make will change the course of our future.
SECTOR 7
David’s private quarters
2512 AD
12:20 PM
“The missing brother.”
PANEL 220: DAVID IS LYING IN HIS BED IN HIS PRIVATE QUARTERS LOOKING AT A PICTURE OF HIM AND HIS BROTHER WHEN ETHAN WALKS IN:
Ethan:
Hey.
David:
Hey.
PANEL 221: ETHAN LEANS UP AGAINST THE WALL AND JUST GET’S DOWN TO THE POINT.
ETHAN:
Hey David umm. What happened with ya’ back in the simulation chamber, everyone’s curious.
DAVID:
I don’t know.
PANEL 222: ETHAN PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN AND SAYS THE OBVIOUS:
ETHAN:
Does this have to do with Jeremy?
(he fires right back)
DAVID:
He didn’t make it back yet, it’s not like him.
PANEL 223: ETHAN GETS UP FROM THE WALL AND PULLS OUT THE CHAIR AND SITS DOWN ON IT THE OPPOSITE WAY:
ETHAN:
Have you just met your brother? He’s always on missions and sometimes he doesn’t make it back for a few days.
DAVID:
You don’t understand this is different.
PANEL 224: DAVID IS LAYING ON THE BED HOLDING A PICTURE OF HIM AND JEREMY:
DAVID:
He never broke his promise and he promised he’d be back an hour ago. Something’s not right.
ETHAN:
Davy you have nothing to worry about.
PANEL 225: ETHAN IS SITTING ON THE CHAIR BACKWARDS:
ETHAN:
Jeremy once took on 2 squad teams leading up to the drill sergeant! I’m sure he take care of himself.
DAVID:
If only there was a way ya’ know?
PANEL 226: DAVID IS LOOKING AT THE PICTURE IN HIS HAND:
DAVID:
A way where I can pinpoint his exact location and radio him to see if he’s okay?
PANEL 227: ETHAN IS SITTING ON THE CHAIR:
ETHAN:
David I’m sure he’ll be back soon.
DAVID:
Easy for you to calm about this.
PANEL 228: DAVID SITS UP ON THE EDGE OF THE BED LEANING FORWARD:
DAVID:
You still have a family out in sector 7.
DAVID:
I lose Jeremy I have no one. I’ll be alone.
PANEL 229: ETHAN TAKES A PAUSE LOOKING AT DAVID BEFORE HE SAYS:
ETHAN:
Your wrong ya’ know.
ETHAN:
I’ve been your brother since before we started SRF training 10 years ago.
PANEL 230: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM SLIGHTLY SMILING.
PANEL 231: ETHAN SMILES BACK REASSURING.
PANEL 232: ETHAN HITS THE TOP OF THE BACK END OF THE CHAIR AND GETS UP HAPPILY SAYING:
ETHAN:
And as your brother, it is my duty to ensure you say goodbye to this worry and hello to goodtimes.
PANEL 233: DAVID LOOKS UP AT HIM AND SAY’S:
DAVID:
Now?
ETHAN:
That’s right, and there’s only way to do this
PANEL 234: ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
ETHAN:
Boys night out!
PANEL 237: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM THINKING HE’S CRAZY AND SMILING:
DAVID:
It’s only 12:30?
PANEL 236: ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SHRUGS:
ETHAN:
So were startin’ early.
PANEL 237: DAVID SAYS:
DAVID:
We have class in 15 minutes.
PANEL 238: ETHAN REPLIES BACK:
ETHAN:
Haven’t you ever heard of “senior ditch day”?
PANEL 239: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM GIGGLING:
DAVID:
How does that even apply to us?
PANEL 240: ETHAN SAY’S BACK GIGGLING:
ETHAN:
Were technically seniors.
PANEL 241: DAVID PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN AND STARTS TO LAUGH:
DAVID:
You’re insane you know that?
PANEL 242: ETHAN LOOKS AT HIM STILL GIGGLING:
ETHAN:
Insane but right…
PANEL 243: ETHAN POINTS AT DAVID STILL GIGGLING AND SAYS:
ETHAN:
And don’t deny it you know I’m right.
PANEL 244: DAVID STOPS LAUGHING AND JUST SITS THERE FOR A MINUTE, ETHAN SAYS:
ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
ETHAN:
Where’s the David I know that’s up for anything?
PANEL 245: DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN SMIRKING:
PANEL 246: ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID SHRUGING HIS SHOULDERS AND PUTTING HIS HANDS IN THE AIR WITH HIS HEALD TILTED:
PANEL 247: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM SMIRKING AND SAYS:
DAVID:
Could be fun.
PANEL 248: ETHAN SLAPS HIS HANDS TOGETHER AND SAYS SMILING:
ETHAN:
Let the games begin!
PANEL 249: DAVID STARTS TO LAUGH AGAIN.
SECTOR 7
Virgil’s private quarters
2512 AD
12:27 PM
SETTING: Virgil is knelt over on his bed praying with a candle and a rosary praying.
PANEL 250: VIRGIL SIGNS ACROSS AND OPENS UP WITH A PRAYER:
VIRGIL:
Lord, even with the horrific meaning of this anniversary I thank you for this day. Thank you for allowing me to walk, talk, see, touch, and feel this morning
PANEL 251: VIRGIL PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN TO HIS FISTS:
VIRGIL:
I would also like to take the honor in thanking you for our current situation. Guide yo’ children into the light to see that all of dis is just a test of faith. And when we climb over to the other side, we will see nothing but yo’ everlasting and powerful grace. In Jesus’ glorious name I pray. Amen.
(Pause)
PANEL 252: YANG IS STANDING IN THE BACK LEANING IN THE DOORWAY WATCHING VIRGIL PRAY.
YANG:
How can belief in someone you can’t see help us see the good to come?
Panel 253: VIRGIL LOOKS SLIGHTLY OVER HIS SHOULDER TRYING TO GET A MESSAGE ACROSS:
VIRGIL:
It’s called faith, Yang. Sometimes da’ best outcomes come from the things we can’t see.
Panel 254: YANG REPLIES:
YANG:
Sometimes we have to just settle with what we can see in front of us.
Panel 255: VIRGIL RESPONDS:
VIRGIL:
Miraculous things can happen when ya’ have faith in a higha’ power.
PANEL 256: YANG SHRUGS AND SAYS WHILE GIGGLING:
YANG:
Look around you Virg, you call this miraculous?
VIRGIL:
Ya’, actually I do.
PANEL 257: VIRGIL SAYS:
VIRGIL:
I believe it’s a miracle how we were able to survivor for 500 years, it’s a miracle that the enhancement gene was found, thus creating all of us SRF’s.
PANEL 258: YANG IS LOOKING AT VIRGIL CURIOUSLY:
VIRGIL:
Miracles can easily remain unveiled by those who refuse to open deir eyes brotha.
PANEL 259: VIRGIL SAYS SMIRKING:
VIRGIL:
If you open yo’ eyes, You’ll see ‘dem to.
YANG’S COMMUNICATOR RINGS IN HIS POCKET. HE PULLS IT OUT AND SMILES:
PANEL 260: VIRGIL LOOKS AT YANG CURIOUSLY WITH A SMILE:
VIRGIL:
I know dat’ look, what’s up?
PANEL 261: YANG THROWS VIRGIL HIS COMMUNICATOR SMILING:
YANG:
Open your eyes to this.
VIRGIL LOOKS AT YANG WITH A SMILE AND SAYS:
VIRGIL:
Dats’ what I’m talkin’ bout’, after all dis’ trainin’ an what not I’m in brotha’,
VIRGIL GLANCES AT YANG STILL HOLDING THE COMMUNICATOR AND SAYS WITH A SMILE:
YANG:
You down?
YANG SHAKES HIS HEAD AND RAISES HIS EYEBROWS AND SAYS:
YANG:
Oh, I’m down
(both giggling)
YANG COMMUNICATOR RINGS AGAIN, THE MESSAGE READS:
MESSAGE:
Ethan – Do NOT! Tell Scarlet.
VIRGIL:
Uh-oh.
SECTOR 7
Classroom
2512 AD
1:30 PM
“AP Gauntlet/Vehicle studies.”
SETTING: THE PROFESSOR IS STANDING AT THE FRONT OF THE CLASSROOM WRITING IN THE HOLOGRAPHIC BOARD. THE CHAIRS ARE FILLED INSIDE THIS ROUND FUTURISTIC CLASSROOM.
SCARLET IS SITTING IN THE CLASSROOM LOOKING AT THE DOOR AWAITING FOR THE DAVID, VIRGIL, ETHAN, AND YANG TO WALK THROUGH THE DOOR.
THE PROFESSOR TURNS AROUND AND LOOKS AT SCARLET AND SAYS:
PROFESSOR:
Ms. Scarlet?
SCARLET TURNS AROUND ABRUPTLY AND REPLIES:
SCARLET:
Yes sir?
THE PROFESSOR SAY:
PROFESSOR:
Are you a one woman squad team, or do the rest of them just not wanna’ pass this class?
SCARLET:
I’m sorry professor.
SCARLET CONTINUE’S BY FINISHING:
SCARLET:
They’ll be here soon, I’m sure they’re just getting their reports ready.
PROFESSOR:
We’ll I hope so…
THE PROFESSOR IS STANDING IN FRONT OF THE CLASSROOM WITH HIS HANDS IN HIS POCKETS:
PROFESSOR:
Without all passing grades this last semester, I’m afraid your squad team will not be graduating…I’ll give them 10! minutes.
SCARLET:
Thank you sir.
SCARLET LOOKS FURIOUSLY AT THE DOOR:
SHE PULLS OUT HER COMMUNICATOR FROM HER POCKET AND TEXT’S DAVID:
MESSAGE:
Where the [frick]! Are you guys?!
ON DAVID’S COMMUNICATOR IT SHOWS THE MESSAGE “Where the [frick]! Are you guys?!”. DAVID PUTS HIS COMMUNICATOR BACK IN HIS POCKET.
DAVID LOOKS UP AND SAY’S:
DAVID:
Well, it’s official. Scarlet is going to murder us.
SECTOR 7
Jackson’s Pub.
2512 AD
1:31 PM
“Early Boy’s Night Out!”
ETHAN, DAVID, YANG, AND VIRGIL ARE SITTING AT A TABLE IN VIRGIL’S OLDER BROTHER’S PUB. ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
ETHAN:
That’s just like her, tryin’ to control every little situation possible. She needs ta’ learn ta relax.
DAVID PICKS UP HIS DRINK AND SAYS BEFORE HE TAKES A DRINK:
DAVID:
We should’ve told her we were gunna’ be here, maybe she’d like to share a few drinks with us to.
ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID CURIOUSLY AND SARCASTICALLY:
ETHAN:
Do I sense secretive emotions arising from one’s veins?
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN AND SAYS:
DAVID:
What the hell are you talkin’ about?
ETHAN:
Oh, come off it already.
ETHAN SAYS WITH A SMILE:
ETHAN:
It hasn’t been a secret since 3rd year.
YANG JOINS THE CONVERSATION AND SAYS:
YANG:
Technically 4th when you consider the almost attempt.
DAVID SHAKES HIS HANDS AND LOOKS AT THEM LIKE THERE CRAZY AND SAYS:
DAVID:
What the [frick] is everyone talkin about?
VIRGIL JOINS IN SAYING:
VIRGIL:
Talkin’ ‘bout Scarlet brotha’, we all wonderin’ when you gunna’ make da’ first move.
DAVID LOOKS AT THEM WITH A SMIRK, AND SAYS BEFORE LOOKING DOWN AT THE BEER MUG AND SAYS:
DAVID:
I think those training exercises are startin’ to get to you guys.
ETHAN:
Oh, I don’t think we’ve been hitting the exercises that hard…
ETHAN IS SITTING THERE SMILING AND TALKING DIRECTLY TO DAVID:
ETHAN:
8th year when the guards were doing an update training session, me and you went up to the 10th
year trainee quarters to meet those chicks I snag in 2nd period lunch.
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN AND SHRUGS SLIGHTLY:
DAVID:
So?
ETHAN SHRUGS BACK AND SAYS GIGGLING:
ETHAN:
During your little make out session you called her “Scarlet”!
YANG AND VIRGIL START GIGGLING.
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN AND SAYS WITH A GIGGLE:
DAVID:
That never happened.
ETHAN:
Oh, yes it did.
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN WITH AN UNBELIEVED LOOK:
DAVID:
No it didn’t come on.
ETHAN STARTS POINTING AT DAVID AND GIGGLING SAYING:
ETHAN:
Yes it did! I also remember you not sleepin’ that night.
EVERYONE GIGGLES:
DAVID LOOKS AT THEM GIGGLING AND SAYS:
DAVID:
You guys are cut off.
ETHAN:
Oh on contraire
ETHAN RAISES HIS ARMS OUTWARD SLOWLY AND LEANS BACK SAYING:
ETHAN:
We just getting’ started.
AT THAT MINUTE AN A MAN IN HIS MID 20’S WALKS IN THE PUB DOORS AND HUGS HIS BROTHER, YOU CAN HEAR THEIR CONVERSATION IN THE BACKGROUND:
BROTHER:
When did you get back from Sector 12?
BROTHER:
Just now!
BROTHER:
It’s good ta’ have ya’ back man.
DAVID IS TURNED AROUND LOOKING BACK AT THE BROTHERS.
HE TURNS AROUND AND LOOKS DOWN AT THE BEER MUG FEELING SCARED, WORRIED, AND CURIOUS.
ETHAN LOOKS AT HIM STUCK NOT KNOWING WHAT TO SAY
YANG IS LOOKING AT HIM SILENTLY AND VIRGIL’S HEAD IS DOWN. BEFORE VIRGIL LOOKS UP AT DAVID HE SAYS:
VIRGIL:
He didn’t make it back yet huh?
VIRGIL LOOKS OVER AT DAVID:
DAVID SHAKES HIS HEAD NO WITHOUT UTTERING A WORD:
YANG ASKES CURIOUSLY:
YANG:
I thought he was supposed to be back already?
DAVID RELIES STILL LOOKING DOWN AT THE BEER SAYING:
DAVID:
Well he isn’t! so.
ETHAN LOOKS AT HIM AND REASSURES ‘EM.
ETHAN:
Ya’ know I think that a boys night is not gunna be enough, I think you might need something else.
DAVID SAYS STILL LOOKING AT THE BEER MUG:
DAVID:
I need what that guy at the bar just felt.
VIRGIL LOOKS AT DAVID AND REPLIES TO HIM:
VIRGIL:
2 Corinthians 5:7 “For we walk by faith, not by sight.”
DAVID:
Ya well, I would never insult you regarding your faith Virg’ but…
DAVID PICKS UP THE BEER MUG HOLDS IT IN FRONT OF HIS FACE. AS HE’S LOOKING IN THE GLASS BEFORE TAKING A GULP, HE SAYS:
DAVID:
I’ll feel better when he’s in front of me.
DAVID TAKES A SIP OF THE BEER.
WRAITHIAN CAPITAL CITY
The Watchtower
2516 AD
1:35 pm
“The Loophole.”
SETTING:
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER AND THE WARLORD ARE DOWN IN THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM. TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT THE REASON WAS FOR THEIR INFILTRATION.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS STANDING OVER THE JEREMIES DEAD BODY, WITH HIS HANDS BEHIND HIS BACK. HE SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
They have never infiltrated inside the watch tower since our rise over them.
WARLORD:
Yes, we’ll we need to find out why.
THE SOVEREIGN LOOKS DOWN AT JEREMY’S GAUNTLET WITH CURIOUSNESS.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TRYS TO PULL IT OFF BUT IT WON’T BUDGE.
THE WARLORD LOOKS OVER AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER CURIOUSLY AND SAYS:
WARLORD:
What are you doing?
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER PUTS OUT HIS HAND AT THE WARLORD AND SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Throw me a blade.
THE WARLORD THROWS HIM THE BLADE THAT HE USED TO SLAUGHTER THE SQUAD TEAM:
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER CHOPS JEREMIES ARM OFF.
HE TURNS AROUND HOLDING JEREMIES ARM WITH HIS GAUNTLET ATTACHED TO IT, HE LOOKS AT THE WARLORD AND SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
The answers that we seek are right here.
THE WARLORD LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WITH OBVIOUSNESS:
WARLORD:
Sovereign, we have tried numerous times to activate their gauntlet weapons, they’re weapons,
like ours, can only be activated by a human.
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Yes, that’s true…
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS WITH COUNTERACTION:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
But we have had a human with us for the last few cycles.
WARLORD LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN LIKE HE HAS ALL THE ANSWERS. HE PUTS HIS WRIST BY HIS MOUTH AND SAYS:
WARLORD:
Bring us the biochemist.
THE BIOCHEMIST IS BEING ESCORTED THROUGH THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM BY TWO WRAITHIAN WARRIORS. HIS HANDS ARE CONTAINED IN A BIO ENERGY CHARGED LOCK GRIP.
THEY PUSH THE FLITY DIRTY BIO CHEMIST TO THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER.
ONE OF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS PUSHES HIM TO HIS KNEES AND SAYS:
WRAITHIAN WARRIOR:
Kneel!
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LEANS DOWN AND LOOKS AT HIM WITH DISGUST:
THE BIO CHEMISTS’ HEAD IS DOWN WHEN THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Do you know how many planets are great race has conquered.
THE BIOCHEMIST CONTINUES TO SIT THERE SILENTLY WITH HIS HEAD DOWN:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
1,000’s… ten’s of thousands.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Guess what?
THE BIO CHEMIST SITS THERE:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Your kind, would give me the most astounding! pleasure in watching you all burn to ashes.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER STANDS UP STRAIGHT AND PUTS OUT JEREMIES ARM WITH THE GAUNTLET ATTACHED TO IT AND SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Put it on, and locate the answers we seek.
THE BIOCHEMIST IS STILL SITTING THERE WITH HIS HEAD DOWN.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LOOKS OVER AT ONE OF THE WRAITHIAN WARRIORS AND KNODES AT HIM:
THE WRAITHIAN WARRIOR PUSHES A BUTTON ON A REMOTE AND ZAPPES THE BIOCHEMIST:
ZZZZCAACZZZCACCAACZZZCACACCZZZZ!
BIOCHEMIST:
ARRRRGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!
THE OTHER WRATHIAN WARRIORS GRABS THE BIO CHEMIST BY HIS DIRTY SHIRT AND PICKS HIM UP BY ONE HAND AND HOLDS HIM FACING TOWARDS THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER, THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Look! At me…when I’m talking! To you scum!
THE BIOCHEMIST LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Now, I will say this one last time.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LOOKS AT HIM WITH ANGER:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Put it on!
THE BIOCHEMIST PUTS HIS HAND OUT FOR THE ARM, HE OPENS IT AT PUTS IT ON HIS ARM.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LOOKS AT THE BIOCHEMIST AND SAYS WITH SLIGHT ENTHUSIASM:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Now we need to know what was there reason for being here.
THE BIOCHEMIST LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WITH DISGUST AND THEN DOWN AT THE GAUNTLET, HE SLOWLY OPENS THE HOLOGRAPHIC SCREEN.
HE BEGINS TO ACTIVATE THE DATA INPUT DEVICE INSIDE THE GAUNTLET AND OPENS THE MISSION OBJECTIVE SCREEN. THE MISSION OBJECTIVE SCREEN APPEARS AND IT SAYS WITH A BULLET POINT.
MISSION OBJECTIVE:
· Locate the extraction point
· Retrieve the bio chemist.
THE BIOCHEMIST’S EYES OPEN AND HE BEGINS TO GO BESERK WITH DEPRESSION AND HEARTACHE.
NO!!! NOOO!! NO!! NOOO!!!!
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TELLS THE WRAITHIAN WARRIOR:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Shut him up!
ZZZZCAAACACZZZCACAAAZZZZACACAA
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TURNS AROUND WITH ASTOUNDMENT AND THE WARLORD IS RIGHT NEXT TO HIM. AS THEIR TALKING QUIETLY IN THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN SEE THE WRAITHIAN WARRIORS BEATING THE BIO-CHEMIST:
WARLORD:
Sovereign, what do we do now?
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Well, first things first.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TURNS AROUND AND SAYS TO THEM CALMLY:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Kill him.
THE WRAITHIAN WARRIORS PULL OUT THEIR BIO BLASTERS AND:
PHING BOOM!
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WALKS AWAY CALMLY AND THE WARLORD STANDS THERE FOR A SECOND CURIOUS AS TO WHY HE JUST DID THAT, THE WARLORD FOLLOWS THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Sovereign commander’s royal chambers:
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WALKS INTO THE ROOM FOLLOWING THE WARLORD:
WARLORD:
Sovereign, permission to speak out of term.
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
I already know what you are going to say warlord.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER ACTIVATES HIS CHAIR AND SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER;
Yes, it was absolutely necessary.
THE WARLORD STANDS THERE SLIGHTY SHOUTING:
WARLORD:
You have appointed! me warlord over our armies not! because I am your closest friend and ally! but because of my knowledge of war and combat! And what! You have just done was obliterate our only chance at getting actually wiping out the humans!
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS SEARCHING THROUGH HIS HOLOGRAPHIC PROJECTIONS WHEN HE SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Have you forgotten what I have told you earlier today?
THE WARLORD PAUSES FOR A SECOND AND THEN SAYS:
WARLORD:
A loophole?
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Correct! And you are right my friend, the bio chemist is our way in at fully! Dominating the humans for good.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS STILL SEARCHING THROUGH THE HOLOGRAPHIC PROJECTION:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
We needed to originally locate their sectors whereabouts and those answers will come in time. But when someone with great attributes as those of the biochemists are needed, they are usually needed for a great importance. It is our job and top priority as to figuring out what he is so desperately needed for by the humans.
THE WARLORD SPEAKS UP:
WARLORD:
I think it’s time we call in the spy.
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SMILES SADISTICALLY AND SAYS:
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Absolutely…