My Pitch for the DCEU Green Lantern Corps Movie!!!

FIRST THINGS FIRST:
 
Previous Movie Post-Credits Scene: A man is flying through space, and he lands on a planet. Yellow smoke fills the air. A village is destroyed, and people are all over, wide-eyed in fear. The man steps from the smoke, clearing it with an emerald blast. (It's Hal Jordan) He points his ring to his mouth. "It's been destroyed." A yellow glow falls over his face. He pauses and looks up. "Send a squad, I'm going to need help." Pan up to show a fleet of spaceships with the Sinestro Corps symbol on the side. Then cut to black.
 
Now then...
         The movie would open with a battle on that same planet. About one hundred Green Lanterns are fighting against the spaceships. The Sinestro Corps is greater in power and they demolish many Lanterns.
         Sinestro beats Hal Jordan until he is unconscious and forces him to use his ring to power a machine. We are then introduced to our heroes: Kilowog, John Stewart, Jade, and Kyle Rayner. Kyle Rayner is the Spider-Man of the team. Kilowog saves his life and they are forced to retreat to the mines of the village.
         Kyle attempts (and fails) to flirt with Jade. Sinestro's machine is giving off a pulse that shuts down Green Lantern Power Rings, so they can't get to close.
         Kyle asks why Sinestro hates them so much. John and Kilowog explain that Sinestro used to be one of them, but he attempted to rule his planet using his power, so he was exiled from the Corps. He stole an ancient ring from the Guardians' vault that was crafted by the Fear Entity Parallax. He murdered Abin Sur, and his ring went to Hal Jordan. Since then, Sinestro has been recruiting an army. Also there would be a little background on the Corps.
         Meanwhile, Sinestro is forcing the Lanterns to use their power rings to power his machine. The four remaining lanterns realize they cannot get close enough.
         Kyle asks his ring: "Can humans breathe in this atmosphere?" It says yes so he tells everyone to remove their rings. They all oblige, but eventually agree. This allows them to sneak through the mines and under Sinestro's ship, Kilowog punches his way through and they silently take out the guards.
         They steal their weapons (blasters and swords). They have Kilowog go undercover, as he would attract the least attention since he does not look human.
         Kilowog puts on the yellow ring and goes inside to guard the cellblock. Kyle, Jade, and John sneak into the cellblock through an air vent. John explains that Sinestro stole these ships from his home world.
         They knock out the guards and liberate the Lanterns inside (only the most powerful power Sinestro's machine). They start to sneak out. Kilowog continues to impersonate a guard.
         Kyle and Jade find the base of the machine. They power up their blasters and stab them with the swords so that they will explode. All of the lanterns (except the ones powering the machine) are out of the ship.
         The machine explodes, taking out many of Sinestro's guards. Sinestro is enraged and he takes Hal Jordan hostage inside the control room.
         Kilowog steals all the rings and give them back to the lanterns, and they all revolt managing to absolutely demolish the guards.
         NOTE: In my version the rings are powered by courage.
         They break into the control room, telling Sinestro it is over. Sinestro makes them stay or else he will kill Hal. Hal says the oath and blasts all of his power to break free. Sinestro is enraged, and he cuts off Hal's hand. Hal groans as his ring shoots off and into space.
         Sinestro screams in rage and creates a sword with his ring; he decapitates Hal and then shoots out of the ship, striking a failsafe button. The ship engine begins to override. They have to go.
         Creating a giant bubble, Kilowog surrounds everyone and they fly off as the ship explodes. Jade carries Kyle's body back to the Guardians. They bury him and the funeral is grim.
         Later, Kyle is sitting in his residential tower talking with Kilowog, Jade, and John. He asks what next and Kilowog says they have to find where Hal's ring went. Then Jade shows on a hologram that there are other emotional spectrums. "Some good, some bad. We just have to figure out which is which." Kilowog and John leave.
         Kyle and Jade talk a little bit and Jade hints towards her dad. They kiss and then she leaves. We cut to Ganthet talking to the other Guardians about the recent battle. One says: "They are the most courageous warriors in the universe. When it needs them, they will be there." Final shot is the Corps flying into space together then cut to black.
         POST-CREDITS SCENE: A pale man sitting on a planet that is dark and covered in dead plants touches a spot on the ground, and a zombie rises up.
         END-CREDITS SCENE: A woman sits ina dark and dirty apartment, watching Pocahantas. Suddenly, a ring breaks through ehr window she screams as a green glow falls over her face. The ring says: jessica Cruz of Earth, you have been chosen!

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